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Jamaica Kincaid Girl

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A short story is a brief fictional prose narrative that leads to a single, powerful outcome. "Girl" by Jamaica Kincaid is not a short story, I think this is actually someone's "How To List" which somehow was mixed in with one of her novels and was published by mistake. Every short story must have three main elements in its construction, "Girl" is not an effective short story because it does not have an exposition, a climax or a resolution. "Girl" reads more like a list rather than a short story.

The characters need to be clearly introduced. It is thought that this is a mother talking to her daughter on how to do a list of tasks, but are they mother and daughter. It could be an older sister talking to a younger sister or an aunt talking to her niece. The only character that is …show more content…

Because this narrative is more like a list of how to do tasks or how to be a good person there is no conflict between the person who is speaking and the girl. The girl only speaks twice and even then she is not trying to start an argument. The first time she speaks she says, "but I don't sing benna on Sundays at all and never in Sunday school." (Kincaid) Here she is just answering the question, " is it true that you sing benna in Sunday school?" (Kincaid) The second time she speaks she is asking a question, "...but what if the baker won't let me feel the bread?" (Kincaid) in reference to being told, "always squeeze bread to make sure it's fresh..." Neither these two exchanges of questions and answers and the ongoing list of tasks depicts any kind of conflict between characters. In similar fashion, the element of rising action is not evident in the narrative between these two characters. It's mostly the main character giving a long list a task that come across very monotone. There is also no conflict in which to help build action between the

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