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Mad Cow Disease Research Paper

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The following passage is from a research paper, and it’s the last body paragraph overseeing the history of mad cow disease. The topic sentence is located at the beginning; Although, I could’ve done a better job clearly stating the main topic: mad cow disease. Instead of stating what the cattle were fed, I could’ve said how many were infected by the mad cow disease or how the British government didn’t believe the disease was transmissible. Overall, the main issue that stood out to me was the way I introduced my quotes. For example, in my first quote, I didn’t introduce the quote before inserting it. Thus, my readers don’t have prior knowledge of what the quote is about. Hence a better way of writing this sentence could’ve been, “Britain decided

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