For this outcome, I chose Major Paper 2 to show that I have achieved developing a complex claim in my research topic. I tried to keep away from my bias in space tourism and used creditable evidence to back up my argument. It was an interesting assignment to pick what I am passionate about and actually knowing more about the issue comprehensively.
3.1 The argument is appropriately complex, based in a claim that emerges from and explores a line of inquiry.
The whole essay should surround a group of individual questions and comprise personal understanding to explore “the underlying concepts and concerns” (Louie, Line of Inquiry Handout). That means the essay consists of multiple areas of knowledge to form a well-rounded argument.
In this assignment, my lines of inquiry are: “is it worth to travel to space?”, “will it be a successful industry in the future?”, and “is it necessary?” (Poon, Canvas Discussion). When I was thinking about these questions, I started with my previous knowledge on space exploration then narrowed the field I wished to know more. I thought of many topics like the astronomical side of
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My argument is not simply a descriptive statement, it is arguable and readers will think of the relation of the topic to themselves. When Cameron asked “who, specifically, does it matter to?”, I wanted to communicate to anyone who cares about the future and not only people who are currently involved in space travel (Louie, MP2 Feedback). While space travel may not be most concerned by the general public, I made it debatable by including the economic factor in the society and effects to the future generation. It is a hot topic currently on social platforms that mean it is an interesting subject to many
• 2) the narration would offer background material on the case at hand • 3) the partition would divide the case and make clear which part or parts the speaker was going to address, which parts the speaker would not take up and what order would be followed in the development • 4) the confirmation would offer points to substantiate the argument and provide reasons, details, illustrations, and examples in support • 5) the refutation would consider possible objections to the argument and try to counter these • 6) the peroration would draw together the entire argument and include material designed to compel the audience to think or act in a way related to the central argument
In this essay, President John F. Kennedy builds an argument to persuade his readers in investing in space exploration. Kennedy uses analogies and reasoning to build his argument towards investing in space exploration. Kennedy’s speech had a powerful impact on the decision whether to direct the resources of the United States toward the construction of a space program.
The world today revolves around technology and is in an ever upward spiraling path of new advancements. This path is now at what some people call the “final frontier”, or the space age. The discoveries being made on this front are overwhelming in comparison to the technology that the world had only twenty years ago. Space exploration was once left up to the governments, as they battled to be the first country in space, but with national debts raising and the cuts made in response, space exploration is beginning to become new grounds for private business owners. Private companies are already beginning to send off rockets at a fraction of the cost that government does, but if more money was put into the government space program, then they
We are discussing space exploration, and looking at it through the lens of social science and the lens of the humanities.
The amount of accomplishments America has achieved in the area of space research is staggering. We have sent man to the moon, landed rovers, and discovered uncountable celestial bodies just by telescope! There are many benefits of space exploration, making it absolutely worth the cost. Some of these benefits are creating new beneficial jobs, and expanding our knowledge. While some argue there are drawbacks to space exploration, I think that the benefits outweigh these drawbacks. In addition, we desire to explore the unknown. As Georgia Douglass Johnson said the the poem “Your World”, in stanza 1 “Your world is as big as you make it”. This means that we can do whatever we want, as long as we’re determined.
Margaret Lazarus Dean’s novel, Leaving Orbit, revolves around the thought provoking question: What does it mean that a spacefaring nation won't be going to space anymore? However, the question could be transformed to ask how this nation has been impacted by the era of space exploration. While tremendous amounts of scientific information has been gained, the effects on society has transformed the lives of generations. Growing up in a spacefaring nation has allowed citizens to develop a sense of pride in America’s accomplishments while inspiring children to work hard to achieve their goals.
Within our first assigned essay, the “Argument Description”, we were asked to identify and describe the primary and secondary arguments for the chosen
I have gathered you all here to persuade you that space exploration is indeed worth the risk despite what a few people think. Those people think that exploration is a complete waste of time and money, but I would have to completely disagree with them because it has many benefits for the human race. Exploration is worth the risk, because it will give us information and resources that we didn’t have access to before we explored that place.
Many critics believe that NASA and space exploration should not be the main focus of the government. However, NASA is not just about flying rockets and putting men into space. There is science and engineering that is being developed to push humanity forward in life. This space program is essential to answering philosophical questions, creating new technology for practical everyday use, the international collaboration with other countries, and the long-term survival of the human
For many years humans have been exploring space to discover the unknown and fuel their curious and adventurous nature, but the decision of whether space exploration is worth the cost is strongly debated. Due to various arguments and evidence space exploration is strongly supported is proven to be worth the cost. Some of these reasons include space exploration being able to expand our knowledge and it being able to generate wealth. With these reasons the argument of whether space exploration is worth the risk can be easily decided.
Stephen Johnson explained that on the other side of the space argument, support for space exploration comes with “Favoring private space endeavors, such as commercial launch systems, space tourism, and mining the Moon for resources” (Johnson, Stephen B). Space could possibly supply resources that we could use in everyday life, but this remains as a maybe, and cannot be confirmed. However, some believe that if a prediction such as that will be acted upon in the near future, it might as well come soon, due to the advancements that modern times have made on technology. Though that stands as an argument, it does not triumph the fact that "[Space] is a difficult, expensive, and potentially dangerous place to operate, [one which] requires a lot of technical skill and money to build, launch, and operate satellites” says Nancy Gallagher, an associate director for research at University of Maryland (Eisendrath, Craig). No amount of predictions can see into the future, therefore no one knows have safe, money-saving, or really just intelligent space exploration may prove. Furthermore, education and money only fill in so many gaps in space, and space as a whole, should remain unscathed by humans. Despite the fact that space might provide valuables for humanity, no predictions can be made about space exploration and be safely
Humans have always been interested in space and the wonder in which it may hold. In the past, humans worshiped the stars as if they were gods while also studying their position to give them guidance for their lives. Their interested in space has fathered the desire to know more. Today, space has been seen by many as the new frontier or the home beyond earth. Society have even taken a step forward through the creation of stories in books and movies based of the idea of humans living in space and the present of alliances. Yet there is still controversy on the need to continue space exploration when our own planet has so many detrimental problems. There is an ongoing debate on whether not the money used for space travel could be better beneficially use for other causes. It is true that space exploration costs billions of dollars a year alone according to NASA current budget, which is constantly increasing. However, what many refuses to understand is that without space exploration many of the innovations that we have today would not have existed. While there have been, many failed attempts involving space exploration that has caused a tremendous amount of money to go down the drain. However, many people fail to realize the benefits of space exploration and the possible future it may
Over the course of the semester, I have been fortunate enough to work with a student who is having difficulties when it comes to reading. My student does not have difficulties when it comes to hearing a word, but rather when he sees a word. My student has definitely benefited from one on one work with me as well as the additional help he’s getting from the reading specialist during their WIN (what I need) time. My student does not like to read because he knows that he is struggling and he is embarrassed about it. When my student goes to his WIN time, he does really well because the instruction is at his level and there are only two other students who are also on the same level there as well. Besides the current intervention, programs I would recommend are Direct Instruction: Reading Mastery, Letter Spacing, Wilson Reading System and the Lindamood program (LiPS).
This article is useful to my research because of the analysis of the relationship between each step in space exploration and the possible benefits in the science field. Although this article is shorter than most of other resources, it clearly explains the whole processes of space exploration as a benign cycle, space resources produce economy, economy provides technologies, technologies creates opportunities to future exploration, future exploration leads to more discoveries and resources, and then back to increase in economy. It is a unique perspective of explaining the reason why we need to explore outer space and mining resources, each step produces considerable benefits.
Since the beginning of the semester, my writing has changed and evolved to accommodate and sustain longer essays. With longer essays, there is more room for in-depth analysis. Further analyzing a topic has led me to findings that I did not know existed. As I continue to write, I uncover addition and superior methods to approach my writing to the benefit of me and therefore, my audience. Throughout the semester, I have incorporated techniques to further my narrative throughout my writing.