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Mark Doty's Poem 'Golden Retrievals'

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Many pet owners wonder what their pets think about or what they would say if they could talk. Mark Doty approaches this inquiry and more through his poem “Golden Retrievals,” a playful yet insightful glimpse into the relationship between pet and owner from a dog’s perspective. The literary device caesura, or installing interruptions and breaks, encompasses Doty’s poem “Golden Retrievals.” The breaks between thoughts allow for an interesting portrayal of the differences between pets and humans, highlighting how humans should live in the present to improve themselves. Doty employs caesura throughout his poem to display the dog “speaker” in both a playful light and to convey the deeper meaning of how they experience complete positivity towards …show more content…

At first, the puppy light-heartedly explains an average day to display his playfulness with “[b]alls and sticks” (Doty 1). By starting the poem as a description of a simple day, Doty exceeds the normal phrasing of a sonnet which surprisingly alters normality to display the truth of a dog’s mindset. The puppy’s thoughts highlight his short attention span when he sees a moving object or “squirrel” (Doty 3). Since the poem begins as a light-hearted portrayal of a day in the life of a dog, the shift to an unsettling conclusion comes as a surprise which illuminates the intellectual capacity for dogs to offer insight to humans. This pup experiences the jubilation when he realizes the squirrel he chases is “—oh/ joy—actually scared” …show more content…

However, the issue, as brought to attention by various individuals and highlighted by the barks of dogs can be fixed. Playing on the dog breed Golden Retrievers, Doty characterizes the pup as a means of “retrieving” humankind from the fears of thoughts overtaking happiness, and by offsetting this one word, he brings a concise realization that humans need advice to live in the present (11). The dogs try to bring their owners “entirely” to the present so they can receive as much love as they provide (Doty 14). Since this word, offset in the poem, engenders a powerful response, the speaker hopes that his actions will make a noticeable difference. The two juxtaposed sides of this poem between playfulness and reflection of unhappiness aptly describe humans’ inability to live in the moment, placing dogs above us since they discover happiness within each day. In fact, dogs may realize their responsibility to retrieve humans from their “haze” determining a possible reason why they bark: to “call [their owners] here” to the present (Doty 12, 13). Doty concludes the poem strongly with caesura establishing how humans should fix the problem “now,” followed by a colon and the onomatopoetic use of barking “bow-wow” (Doty 14). This forceful end to the dog’s thoughts convey the importance of change represented by the passion in the

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