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My Opinion Of Creativity And Mental Disorders Subjective Nature Essay

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Hello Professor Huffman. The primary motivations for writing this draft is to argue that my opinion of creativity and mental disorders subjective nature is a valid one. My other primary motivations are to achieve a good grade and too improve my writing abilities. I revised my essay by fixing the grammar mistakes you listed in the first draft, and correcting citation and grammar mistakes as I reread my essay. I also expanded on my counter arguments to hopefully convince my audience that I understand that they may have doubts after reading the earlier portions of my essay. I received feedback from Khalid Alkhaldi, however, I did not accept all of his feedback I did expand on his point that the counter argument was not yet adequate and expanded on it like I mentioned above. One criticism of his criticisms was that my thesis was not clear, however, I would argue that it is very clear. I believe that he may think that the first sentence of an essay is the only place a thesis can be based on what he said. If this was not the case I do not know how to make it any clearer, which would be my mistake of course. The lesson I learned is that I should not choose topics that are very open-ended unless I am a stakeholder or have a strong opinion on the topic. The biggest challenge I had in writing this is the fact that I had no real opinion, besides the fact research is required to know what was true.

Creativity and Mental Disorders: Subjective Dilemma The mentally ill have been

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