As a high school student taking on a college course, I acknowledged and accepted the challenge that lay ahead of me. The main reason I selected Composition I and II was that it allowed me to vastly improve my overall writing skills. Developing my techniques will benefit me when I am required to compose any writing assignments for my future college classes. Therefore, with that goal in mind, I chose to take this class while still attending high school. I began this class as an average writer; additionally, I did not know the majority of the writing rules or how to make an essay meet its potential. Over the course of these two classes, I believe that I have proven my writing to be more seamless and interesting to read. Comparing the first paper …show more content…
I made my pieces fascinating by adding in descriptive vocabulary, startling statistics, inspiring quotes, and complex sentences. In one of the first essays I wrote, “Hurricane Preparedness,” I began the paper with a sentence that did not describe the topic in depth. To explain, “Hurricane Harvey hit Houston, Texas hard this past August leaving them with a devastating amount of destruction to their city.” This sentence is awfully straightforward and does not elaborate on the topic well enough. By adding in more details, I would have prepared the audience for the essay more adequately. I should have included a more advanced explanatory word instead of “hard.” Nevertheless, throughout this class I was able to learn how to expand on what I am speaking about and find the proper words to explain the topic to its fullest potential. To demonstrate, I introduced my piece, “Coaching Rivalry,” by creating an image for the reader that set the tone for what was ahead. With this intention, I wrote, “Stepping back into the early 1960s, the facility hosting the Duke vs. North Carolina men’s basketball game is packed tight. The crowd goes ballistic after a Blue Devil, Art Heyman, and a Tar Heel, Larry Brown, are pulled apart from an outrageous brawl. This moment is where the intense rivalry between the two teams all began.” Including this short anecdote at the beginning of my paper created a clear and vivid image for the reader. Ultimately, incorporating engaging, descriptive words to make a piece more fascinating will help keep an audience
The first few years of college student’s lives are not necessarily the most enjoyable time, having to take the basic core classes. Unless someone is planning on getting their degree in something that involves the basic core classes like; Math, Psychology, any Humanities, or English. English has not been my strong suit and I know that I still have work that needs to be done to make me a better writer, but I believe that I was able to meet and achieve the goals and requirements of this Composition two class.
Throughout the progression of this course I learned countless things concerning my writing. {Simkin, M. G., Crews, J. M., & Groves, M. J. (2012). While it’s there’s a many amounts of things ‘ve learned throughout the course, there are several things I‘ve learned which include the step by step process, including the correct usage of grammar and properly proofreading my work before I turn it in. I found out i had a major problem with my punctuation usage and insufficient when it came my periods and commas. I’ve invested some time writing through grammarly and other helpful sites to improve my writing skills. I appreciate the assistance and help I received from Mrs. C
English Composition I has developed my style of writing and my skills analyzing and researching topics to write a piece about a topic. Throughout the course, I got better at analyzing articles and pieces to get the meaning of the topic. With that improved skill I was more able to use the information given from the text and install it into my essays, with proper citation if needed. Before taking the English Composition course, I was not one to organize my essays in an ordeal order to clearly state the point of the work. Now with taking the course, I have learned to organize my essays, examine research for a topic, and develop an essay with proper mechanics, and revising skills. In writing my personal, review, analytical, and cultural
As the Fall 2017 term comes to end, I look back on what I have accomplished in this class. English 102 – Composition II was one of the most challenging and toughest class I have taken at UW-Stout, but feel as though it has helped me to improve my writing skills. Even before the semester started the feeling of anxiety had taken over, as writing has never been my strongest skill, but stayed positive and confident I would be successful. Much to my surprise, my instructor, Michael Critchfield quickly addressed that this class would not be easy and amazingly changed my views of writing throughout the entire semester.
I grew up in a extremely small town outside of Birmingham, and the high school I went to is not known for its academia. If I recall right, my high school english classes assigned only 1-2 papers a year, so writing 4-5 in a semester was a completely new adventure for me. I learned many things in this course that greatly helped me improve my writing. My writing overall improved in style, flow, and basic fundamental writing thought processes, which is all the areas that are hard to learn. I started to see my style and flow had grown bland and very fact based instead of grabbing the attention of the readers. Now that I understand where my writing needs improvement, I can start focusing on those areas and fixing my papers.
I entered my first-year college composition course believing I was equipped with the knowledge, skill, and ability to write an efficiently researched and well-organized essay. In high school, I learned how to create the traditional five-paragraph paper with its introduction of a thesis, explanation of that claim through three sections riddled with supporting quotes, and conclusion that restated the author’s substantiated statement. This was the prescribed formula I had learned and grown accustomed to using for book reports, compare-and-contrast papers, and research essays and, from my bestowment of high grades and praise, I’d never thought to question or deviate from its pattern. When I attended my first college writing class, I thought
When this semester first started I did not enjoy writing, the process, the grading, and just writing itself. I did not consider myself a good writer, but I knew that I was decent. Most of my papers were decent and I received average and above average grades on them. Even though I received good grades I still did not find myself a good writer. When entering this class, WRTG 120, I was afraid that it would be my hardest class and that I would have a hard time. In other words I was scared, and hearing the writing outcomes for this course did not help. I have heard of most of the outcomes but being able to write using them in writing I knew was going to be hard. In this paper I am going to talk about how I used the five out comes
Throughout middle school my classes were all the same, I showed up, learned, received my assignments, and left. There was one class that was different; it was my Language Arts class. The teacher’s name was Mrs. Lorentsen and she was not the average teacher. For example, in her class we rarely had lectures and I can remember vividly my adventures with her. We completed assignments that were called Independent Study Projects (ISPs), Common Place Books (CPBs), and completed 3D book reports. These are all different ways of presenting information through creativity and problem solving. These foreign type assignments seemed strange at first, as they are different from a traditional classroom setting. I quickly adjusted to her classroom, and learned that I enjoyed this style of learning. Throughout the class Mrs. Lorentsen and I both noticed a commonality in my writing. Putting my thoughts and opinions on paper became a struggle for me.
Wow, where do I begin? When I first came into this class I assumed it was just another boring writing class that I just needed to walk away with an A in. Boy did I walk away with more. The main things I came away with were that writing is a way to express myself when I don’t have the voice to say it. Sometimes it's much easier to write my ideas on paper and later find the proper word choice to bring it all together. I became my biggest critic, whether it was about using the correct word choice or correcting my paper and realizing that my sentences weren’t flowing smoothly. Those are pretty big components to writing. So yes, I’d say this class changed my outlook on writing.
My bracelet sits under my bed, so that I will not lose it. It sits in a box with all of the other things my brother has gotten me over the past couple years. Most people find it weird that I keep the stuff my brother gave me in a box but most people do not have to worry about there brother bring a Marine.
I have learned many skills during my time in the introductory writing class of WRIT 1. This class focuses on academic writing, the purpose of which is to accurately and concisely provide your audience with necessary information. Professionals across all disciplines must have this ability, as no ideas are practical if no can understand them. This skill in particular has developed with every iteration on this paper that I have written. One way that this skill has manifested is on the sentence scale. I have learned how to better reformat sentences, without changing their fundamental meaning, to make them more understandable and concise.
A journey into something unknown can be a very nerve-racking experience. For myself, this journey was into Composition 1 this semester. Coming into a college level writing class as a junior in high school was an exciting feat for my academic career. However, I was scared for the next step I would have to take. Little did I know that through the next fourteen weeks of writing I would grow exponentially. This class helped me to experience physical growth, emotional growth, and make critical improvements for the future.
Throughout my years of English class, essay writing has always been one of my weakest points. Putting my thoughts onto a piece of paper is easy, but it is the process of reforming my thoughts and conveying them properly that is difficult to do. The most difficult type of essay for me is argumentative. I find good quotes that are relative to the topic and incorporate them into my essay well. However, when writing, analysis and syntax is where I am the most lacking.
The practice of writing is deeper than being a monotonous necessary evil in college; writing is an essential and multipurpose tool, a skill, and a form of personal expression. The quality of one’s writing can be the difference between whether they are hired for a job, get acceptances for scholarships, or whether or not they are able to communicate their emotions in a healthy way. In my relationship with writing, my preferred mediums have changed and my skills as a writer have transformed drastically, with skills I once possessed as a young writer diminishing due to a lack of practice. Due to my lack of practicing creative writing in high school, paired with the development of an extremely introverted personality, I face many challenges in creative
Foundations of College Writing is a class that will require most of the work to be done outside of school, which is what I’ve learned over the last four weeks here at Bloomsburg University. My other classes require studying, and a lot of reading outside of class which is expected being college leveled courses. Foundations of College Writing however requires a lot of creativity, and busy work rather than the memorization of information. With that being said, this class is a totally new style that I have little experience with that could help me succeed. However, with the assignments being almost systematically designed to either make you think about the world, or to be personable with the content, I believe the work spent outside of school will be well worth it.