Personal Narrative: My Favorite Places That Led Me To Disney World

As an 8-year-old child, the worlds scary place. Everywhere you look there’s something terrifying. From people the size of giants, roaming the streets, with no care what so ever with their surroundings or just realizing that in a few years would come the most difficult and emotionally unstable time of my life. Sure, those things may be slightly exaggerated, but what I do know is the most horrendous experience I had in the land of joy that ultimately ruined my love Disney for many years.

Errors: Starting the revision to this essay was very easy for me after this semester. English 101 helped my writing skills so much from high school to where I am now. I started by re reading my entire Literacy Narrative essay. Even just reading through this essay after three months, I picked out a lot of stuff that I could change. The first obviously was just going through and checking all my grammar. There were a lot of times where I could have used commas and did not. Many times I could have used better transitional words that just made the sentences flow better so I tried to fix a lot of those mistakes. Another minor issue was a more defined use of vocabulary so I tried making some of the simple words bigger and give it more spice. Secondly, going hand in hand with grammar I fixed some minor spelling errors even though there really weren't too many.

I will never forget my trip to Six Flags, St. Louis. This all started when I was fourteen years of age. My step dad, who lived in St. Louis, decided to invite me to visit for the summer. I was so excited to go! When the day came he pulled up at my house he asked me if I had all my stuff ready I said, “Yes sir! Let’s go!” Then my step dad’s family and I piled into the two cars and hit the road. The whole ride there I thought about all the things I wanted to do at Hurricane Harbor and Six Flags.

    I’ve been to Disney World three times in my life. Although all three times were fun, the third one was the most eventful because when I was seven years old I was almost kidnapped at the happiest place on Earth.

My family and I traveled to Six Flags this summer for a family vacation. Six Flags is located outside of Atlanta,Georgia. While traveling to Six Flags we stopped at the Birmingham Zoo. when going down the Goliath,I panicked and started to scream.We rode another roller coaster and my fear became more magnified. We also rode the bumper cars and my brother ran into me. We didn't want to spend our summer patrolling the neighborhood on our scooters. We also went because we didn't work interfering with our family time. We wanted to go somewhere fun and exciting. While dinning at our vacation this summer we saw a chef chopping vegtables. The weekend we went to Six Flags qualified as a vacation.On our trip to Six Flags my brother interfered with

I don’t ever want to forget the day we went to Six Flags. In the morning I woke up my parents at 9:00 in the morning so we can get there early and get tickets. Next, I ask my friend if he can come and he said “Sure I’ll come”. So, when my friend was ready to go we left to Six Flags Great Adventure. In addition, when we got there we started off with the games. My friend and I were versing each other on different games. We also went into the haunted house. When we got bored we went on the roller coaster. We went on Superman, Green Lantern, and the Joker, and the most coolest part the Ferris Wheel! After that, we took a break and got back to the rides. Later, when we were tired out, we went home.

Have you ever been scared of trying something new and exciting? Well, I once was. One summe day, my family decided to take a trip to Six Flags. This amusement park is full with thrill rides. I had never been on a roller coaster before. Not the ones with twenty stories high drops and speeds of fifty miles per hour.

It was a hot sunny,afternoon ,my family and I were heading to Six Flags 5 long hours away from where we live which is Atwater California,but it felt like a 30 hour trip. When we got to the hotel that we were going to stay at for 4 days while we were visiting Six Flags my parents asked me if I would start walking with my little brother to the entrance where my big brother, sister ,grandma ,and aunt were waiting in the first lobby. I reached out to text my brother that we were heading over to the hotel but my phone wasn’t there! I started to freak out and I actually pinched myself just to see if it was a dream but it wasn’t I asked my little brother if he had seen it but he said that he hadn’t. All I was thinking about was what my parents would say about me losing my phone.

It began when my family and I were going to six flags. We were getting on roller casters. Both of my brothers were laughing and I was screaming. Then suddenly my brothers were playing around and they got lost. They were playing around with me, they kept saying boo and creepy things. After that my brother quietly creeped up to me and they scared me so bad.fianilly we went on the biggest roller coaster in six flags my mom stared to yell so loud.

Why have I gone to Florida so many times in the past 8 years? Because my wife loves Disney World and I too have developed a love for this fairy tale land. It holds a special place as the destination for our honeymoon. Later this became the destination for our family’s’ vacation with our son and daughter. Disney World is one of the most attractive destinations to individuals across the globe. By far, Disney World is the most fun to enjoy with family and friends. Disney allows for both children and adults alike to enjoy the same rides, attractions, and shows. The parks are situated in a part of the country where the weather does not impede an individual’s enjoyment on a long term scale as the temperatures remain well above freezing year around.

Trying to find memories is like looking for treasure. You look at the surface and see something mediocre, but you dig deep and find something cool, pretty, and meaningful. It took a while to think of a fond memory, but once I thought of some, it was hard to choose a favorite. Growing up I have had many great experiences in the form of vacations. Between going to Disney World, owning a vacation home, hanging out with my grandparents in Arizona, traveling to Canada and more. They all make amazing memories that I will forever cherish. The vacation spot we go to the most, though, is Wisconsin Dells. A few times I have been allowed to invite friends to come with. When I am allowed to bring friends, it is always a ginormous amount of fun. We goof off in the hotel room, play in the arcades, and swim in the water parks.

Over the summer me and my family went to Yosemite national park. One of the hikes we did was 10 hours and 16 miles, it was brutal. On the way up the mountain we climbed 5,000 feet, and we saw two waterfalls. Id say the highlight of the trip was getting to the car after that hike and drinking ice cold

I met the love of my life at the Disney Store. As disgusting as it is, I have been drinking out of one cup for the past decade. This cute, pink cup crafted from engineering genius is able to hold exactly one cup of water without spilling over making for quite a useful substitute measuring cup. It features Marie, the little sister kitten from my, at the time, favorite movie “The Aristocats” encased in a sparkly, semi snow globe type contraption. Unless offered a disposable cup, I simply refuse to drink out of any other glass.

My heart palpitates as I walk into Disney World, it seems like something out of a dream. For a moment I desire only one thing, that my family was beside me in this journey, but I quickly relinquish the thought knowing that wasn’t possible. I then let out a sigh, blinking away the tears that seemed to have already formed in my eyes. “Keep your focus” I quickly and strictly muttered to myself as I wander around the theme park.

Remember those trips to the store or the mall you took with your mom because you either wanted something or you had to go? Everywhere you went, there’s always that one family with that one child that does something to the extreme that embarrasses them to cause everyone in the store to look. They could be running around knocking things down, screaming to the top of their lungs because they couldn’t get what they wanted. Then you always have that one in the family that believes they are invisible and runs around the store with little to no clothes on. It’s funny at first because you know you would never do that at all. However, that is when you’re older and you don’t believe the stories your parents tell you. I, undoubtingly, fall into that category.