1. What is the real subject of this piece? As a reader, what do you think this essay is really about?
Real Subject: Narcissism Disorder
I think the essay is really about a person who was emotionally hurt by someone with narcissism disorder
2. Identify specific places where the use of sights, sounds, and smells could be further developed to provide more of an emotional impact in readers.
Possibly you can describe the sound of the voice and some physical characteristics of the “narcissistic” person in the narration.
3. If you were to keep one line from this essay and throw away the rest, what line would you keep? Why?
If I was to keep one line from the essay and throw away the rest, the line I would keep is: “This was the start of my awakening,
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4. How do the intro and conclusion mirror or echo one another? How do they properly frame the essay as a whole?
The intro gave me information about what is a “narcissist”, and the conclusion encourages the reader to keep looking for information. I enjoyed your essay, it was very informative, I didn’t have an idea that narcissism was a disorder.
5. Look at the setting of the essay. Based on the need for research, discuss ways in which the author could bring in more outside research to develop scenes further.
I think you did an extensive research about the topic. Perhaps if you can include some examples of narcissism behavior and how was treated would develop the scenes further.
6. Read the story as a reader. What parts interest you the most? Where you are least interested? What questions do you still have? Provide suggestions for improvement.
I like the entire essay because the topic was not familiar at all. It is well documented, and I can see you have done lots of research about it. How did you handle the situation ; or how do you feel about this experience
3. Examine the cover of the novel. What images do you see? How do you think the images are connected to the story?
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The Outsiders Essay – Describe an interesting theme from a text you have studied. Explain why this theme is interesting.
2. Do you think most readers are apt to respond to Eighner's essay with sympathy? Pity? Impatience? Contempt? Disgust? How do you react? Why?
2. What was interesting about the process you went through in writing this paper, and what did you learn from it? The process of researching the topic was very interesting because although I had already read the novel, re-reading parts of it allowed me to elaborate more in this assignment.
f. What technique(s) does Brady use to introduce her essay? Comment on the effectiveness. g. How does Brady conclude? Is her conclusion long enough for this essay? h. Ms. is a popular publication, in contrast to a scholarly journal. In light of this, describe Brady's style and explain why she uses the level of vocabulary and sentence structure she does. i. How would you describe Brady's tone? Does it change or evolve as we get nearer to her
Have you ever been around someone who seems arrogant? It may not be just arrogance, that individual may have a Narcissistic Personality Disorder or NPD. Narcissus, a Greek mythological character, fell in love with his reflection in the water and could never pull himself away, so he ended up dying right beside the water after a while (Marcovitz 1). Narcissism became known as being self-centered and was developed after this Greek myth (Marcovitz 1). This disorder affects less than 1% of the American population and it occurs more in men than women (Thomas 1). Later on in life most people with NPD will experience severe symptoms around the ages of forty or fifty years old (Psych 1). Many people who have this disorder either refuse to get help
Essay: What does the narrator seem to want from the reader? How does she go about getting what she wants?
Sample Question 1: In some works of literature the insanity (or a period of insanity) of a main character plays a central role. Choose a novel or play of literary merit and write an essay in which you discuss the mental illness of a central character and the specific ways in which that character’s illness relates to the larger themes of the work. Avoid plot summary.
Hello Rozhnaz! This writing looks better than the previous one that I revised; congrats! You also gain improvement in terms of the use of academic vocabularies in this essay. Some notes to be considered here are the minor things such as punctuation, redundant expression, and capitalization. Here are several takes on your writing:
My “best” piece is my rhetorical analysis written about a high school senior’s controversial yearbook picture. I feel that this essay in particular is the best one I wrote because it demonstrates both my strengths and weaknesses as a writer. This essay was one of the more difficult ones to write. At the beginning of the semester we focused on primarily on personal writing, “showing not telling” and the use of colorful language. For this essay, however, we focused on the academic knowledge, logic and criticism aspects of writing. Admittedly so, I disliked writing this essay. Writing this essay was a new experience for me because I had never focused on the negative aspects of someone else’s work. Re-reading my essay multiple times after receiving feedback from you made me question myself.
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1. How is this essay constructed? Describe the parts of the piece (and how many, etc.) Provide brief descriptions of the work that each part is doing and how it goes about doing it.