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Reflection On The Declaration Of Independence Essay

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I found the essay on the Declaration of Independence, as I did not have much prior information about the topic. Also I did not have a very strong topic sentence, as it did not correlate very well with the rest of the essay and my thesis sentences did not contain parallelism. Additionally, my essay did not clearly state which side would be better for the improvement of the United States of America, rather I just stated the viewpoints of both sides. Furthermore, I had some grammatical errors which could have been easily avoided. For example I included a fragment sentence in my essay and my essay contained questions, in contrast to my writing, an essay should only contain sentences which persuade, inform, or to entertain. Lastly I should have

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