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Reflective Essay Writing

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Preparing for my final year of high school, relief and enthusiasm poured over for the idea of the pain and suffering of assignments ending in one hundred and eighty days. However, I never would have imagined growing academically, especially in my writing, over the course of just one semester. Reflecting back on the first few assignments in Expository Writing, they were tragic. A mess is the easiest explanation of their composition. Entering this course, a goal of simply wishing to finish each paper was sadly set, but it became evident that if I put my heart into the writing and took my time that some wonderful pieces could be produced. Over the course of the semester, I learned how to make my writing more formal, how to integrate and embed quotes, as well as learning how to writing multiple drafts with self and peer editing. Beginning the first couple weeks in Expository Writing, papers were very informal. This course helped in realizing how to eliminate informal writing by avoiding the use of “you”, “I”, slang, and contractions. Growing up in elementary and middle school, teachers’ goals were to cram into our brains how to properly form contractions and, as humans, we use slang every day of our lives. Taking a course that requires the elimination of these informal qualities was very challenging at first. However, with help, the first draft of the “__” the Writer assignment, which contained “I” 41 times, was slowly revised to the final draft, which only contained “I” 4 times. Another example of making writing more formal is the elimination of contractions in the same assignment. My first draft of “__” the Writer contained the sentence “Our greatest memories are said to be those we haven’t even realized have impacted us.” After self and peer edits on the paper, the final sentence was “Our greatest memories are said to be those we have not even realized have impacted us.” Eliminating contractions and “I” made the paper more formal. This is a rather large improvement and something I am very proud of. As I studied how to create formal writings, it tied into another area of growth in writing. Writing multiple drafts, self-editing, and peer editing are helpful in creating an academically fluent and appropriate

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