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Thesis Statement For The Communist Manifesto

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Review of the Impression of big Words In the beginning of reading the given essay “the ‘Communist Manifesto,’ 150 years later” one can easily mistake the abstract as the opening paragraph. If one was to mistake it for the opening paragraph it makes perfect sense for the thesis, but the actual opening paragraph is only a couple sentences and possibly one of longest sentences that one has ever seen. The opening paragraph does contain a thesis statement, but it is jumbled. It states that if Marx and Engels would have been exposed to information that was published later that they would have revised their claims. Antonio Gilman wrote a paper in English that was harder to read then the last essay that had French phrases. This may be partly due …show more content…

With the headers it is very organized, but without them it becomes a lot harder to decipher the essay. It is easy to get lost in the essay, for it seems that the in the beginning it seems that that it is about how Marx and Engel would change their manifesto, but in the end it seemed that it is about the manifesto being a tool for social scientist. This seems to lead to the idea that the manifesto even though it partly wrong due to new information, it still has its merits as a tool that is an alternative. The author uses excellent supporting material and the references are made using a better system. An example of this is in the “the dynamism of capitalism” section. It begins with a quote and that is from a secondary-primary source, for it is the “Communist Manifesto”, but is possibly modified for modern times. Most of the rest of the references are secondary sources. Another example is the quote from B. Bender explaining that supply and demand and other similar theories are capitalist. It proves a point very well in balance with the others. There are also a lot of in text citations. One question I am left with is what actually the “Communist Manifesto” is? The preamble of the manifesto gave to some clues and it seems according to it that the Germans were always a group that like to have espionage as a policy

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