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Upanishads And Vedas Rhetorical Analysis

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Alexa, After reading over discussion post I was very impressed. I think that you had a great overall explanation of both the Upanishads and Vedas, and the Puranas. I really liked your introductory paragraph, but think that you should consider revising your thesis statement. It reads “The form of worship has changed from sacrifice in the Vedas and Upanishads to devotion in the Puranas”, I would consider revising the beginning of your sentence by combining your thesis sentence with the previous sentence to add context. It could read something along the lines of “Over time Hindus have altered their forms of worship from sacrifice in the Vedas and Upanishads to devotion in the Puranas.” I really like that you supported all of your points with

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