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Use Of Antidepressants And Antihypertensive Medications

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It is true that certain medications can help reduce the effects of ADHD, however, stimulants, antidepressants and antihypertensive medications have many hidden psychiatric, physical, and emotional consequences that can have long term effects.

Please write a minimum of 100 words for each of the three questions below, describing the progress you have made in your writing. Make sure you proofread your self-review before submitting.

1. What changes or improvements did you make to your commentary essay rough draft? Identify specific parts of your paper that you revised. Why did you make these changes to your rough draft? (100 words minimum)

During the writing of the initial draft for the commentary essay, I did not really understand the commentary paper concept. Consequently, I wrote the entire paper and realized that I just needed to start from the beginning. The paper did not satisfy the requirements as written in the rubric. After I completed the second draft of the paper, I was more comfortable with its content. The longest part of writing the paper for me was the introductory paragraph and the thesis statement. Initially, my introduction contained information that should have been written in the body of the paper. Furthermore, the thesis was weak and did not directly explain the main points of what was going to be discussed in the body of the paper. Once I revised the body of the paper, I started working on the thesis statement. I wrote the initial thesis and

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