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Why Do Parties Become Out Of Control Essay

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Teenage parties have become a controversial issue as they are now becoming out of control. The recent news about 15 year old Jaiden being punched and put into a coma attending a party, sparked the debate over whether these teen parties should happen. Wendy Tuohy has written an opinion piece arguing that these parties have become out of control. In her article, she creates the impression that parents are becoming irresponsible in allowing them to happen. Tuohy critically opens her article with an anecdote that describes how parties are becoming out of control at a younger age. She mocking describes how parents are becoming more irresponsible in the running of these parties at such a young age. Through the use of the picture she enables parents to see what happens at these parties which parents do not want their …show more content…

She sarcastically states that "thanks to social media saturation…some idiot crasher could deliver the punch that destroys a life". The use of emotive language creates fear in parents but also makes parents feel as if social media and its use by their children is to blame for possibly their children having their lives destroyed. Tuohy also explains how "[children not being safe at parties is] largely due to social media". Reaffirming the idea that social media is not allowing their children to be safe when parents let them go to parties. Tuohy also describes "social media [as] the detonator". Through the use of the word "detonator" it makes parents feel as if social media is dangerous, as it is associated with the word bomb, and makes her readers question if social media should be used by their children. As should something this dangerous be associated with their children. Wendy Tuohy creates the impression that social media is to blame for parties becoming out of control but also creates worry within parents as most of their teenagers are using

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