1. What do you think that essay was lacking most? By rereading the essay, I was able to identify that it was lacking a sense of direction. Going through the paragraphs, it looks like I am stitching together evidence from the book, that doesn’t really go that well. Also, not only did I stick together evidence, I reused the evidence on multiple occasions in different paragraphs, causing a sense of redundancy. What really surprises me is that I did extensive planning before I sat down to right this essay, and that just goes to show that it wasn’t enough. Knowing the basic principals of literature, and an understanding of what you are writing is key to maintaining a great essay. After all, if you don’t thoroughly understand what you are writing, …show more content…
What is one general way that you can improve your writing? One general way that I can improve my writing is by, going over the basics of literature. I didn’t pay attention that much in elementary school, so I probably missed out on crucial tips that could make be a better writer. The basic principles of literature include but are not limited to: avoiding redundancies, trimming long sentences, avoiding the use of long quotes, and by always having a plan before sitting down to write an essay. After all, if you go into an essay without a clear-cut understanding of what you’re about to write about, it’ll just look like a vortex of ideas stitched together with …show more content…
Considering what you've written above, what will you attempt to demonstrate with Advanced Proficiency on your upcoming essay? To demonstrate Advanced Proficiency in my upcoming essay is by first, thoroughly preparing my essay before sitting down to write it. I would plan out each paragraph, and make any necessary changes when writing my essay. If I combined this with going over the basics of literature, expanding my vocabulary, and troubleshoot my grammar, I believe I will demonstrate Advanced Proficiency. But, all of these tasks wouldn’t matter if I don’t have a great understanding of the poem. That’s why I will strive to understand the poem in-depth, before I even begin to plan my essay. I’m fairly confident that by the end of all these, I’ll be a better writer than ever
Like transforming from a caterpillar to a butterfly, my writing style transformed from something mediocre to something quite exceptional. In high school, even when I took advanced placement English and Literature courses, I was never good at writing. My writing would lack structure, reasoning, syntax, and a well-defined thesis statement. My inadequate grades on writing assignments lowered my self-esteem, so I assumed I would never enjoy writing papers because I believed I could never improve. However, since attending a university my writing style has improved far beyond my expectation. My EN 101 course enhanced my understanding of the different ways I could approach my writing. Also, it enhanced my comprehension of outlines to complete assignments. Investing quality time into my writing made a substantial difference because I became a stronger writer. Through the late nights, constant revisions, and agonizing head traumas, I learned that my writing is truly spectacular whenever I incorporate well-defined thesis statements, provide sufficient supporting evidence, and maintain a clear focus in my assignments.
It is essential to understand that classes taken in grade school do not give students a full understanding of each subject. With the topic of writing, there will always be a new lesson to learn, an aspect to improve, or a differing way to explain. Author Craig Vetter states in Bonehead Writing, “This is your enemy: a perfectly empty sheet of paper. Nothing will ever happen here except what you make happen.” Each story, essay, or response comes from a writer’s experiences. With each attempt at a new piece comes an underlying story of emotions the writer is facing. Each person’s writing is unique and the ideas people have are related to their past experiences and what they believe to be familiar with when deciding which writing style to use. As a high school student, I have learned many things about writing that helped me become the improved writer I am today, but the most essential advice I have received is practice makes perfect. Although there is no actual perfect way of writing, I have discovered that each essay I write, my writing improves. It is easier to spot mistakes, find areas to improve, and ponder elevated word choice to use.
Bettering your skills of writing is extremely important because writing can help you with several different aspects throughout your life. Being a good writer can help you solve problems, learn, and triumph in school and future jobs. So how do you improve your writing? Firstly start with your mental state. You have to be willing to learn and give yourself the proper amount of time and knowledge in order to do well. Secondly, use the resources around you such as your syllabus, tutors offered through your school, and online
I immensely struggled when writing. Taking my scrambled thoughts and uncoordinated analysis and converting it into clean and understandable words on a page was arduous. I could not express my thoughts in proper academic format. I understood the importance of writing to every subject. It was essential that I learn to condense my ideas and feeling into coherent written word. After much debate, I decided that the best way to improve my writing skills was to take an advanced English course.
In our society, people communicate through various ways. One of the most essential way is writing. Through writing, people convey their thoughts and ideas, connect to others, and pass on wisdom generations by generations. More importantly, writing effectively promotes the advancement of society. Though some people have not realized the how writing benefits from writing, the author of the article “How to Read Like A Writer”, Mike Bunn illustrates that focusing more on the rhetorical “strategies” and structure rather than the content can improve our own writing.
Writing an essay may seem like a huge obstacle to overcome, but with a plan of attack and a little organization, it can be easily completed. All it takes is seven easy steps.
Every writer and reader has their own opinion and perspective on things. In “Exploring Language” chapter 2, all the authors had a great point and advice about how to be a successful writer. The one with the most useful information for improving my own writing was a professor at the University of California-Davis, Anne Lamott’s essay because I can totally relate to the subject. It has been always a struggle for me to write any of my college paper, but Lamott eased my fear of writing. She states “It is a matter of persistence and faith and hard work.
It is pleasing to see my literary skills improve over the year. The stark contrast between my first essay about Speak and my last essay on To Kill a Mockingbird is excellent. Here are the areas where my last essay was superior to my first. I improved in organization and clarity. In the final essay, I was able to make an introduction that grabbed the reader's attention and provided context for the essay as well as a conclusion that left an impression on the reader in addition to an elegant and logical overall organization. Another area I improved in was command of paragraph structure. I wrote four paragraphs that effectively included all of the elements of a point, introduction, quote and a two-part analysis to create one unified point. I provided
This particular article has been of quite some help with improving my writing abilities! Do you ever find yourself rewriting instead of writing? If you are a writer and are in need of helpful hints with what I think is the most important part of the writing process, revision. In Internal Revision the author, Donald Murray, emphasizes this writing skill that is the least used but one of the most important.
My entire life, reading and writing have always been my weaknesses. Coming from a Hispanic household, the way things are said and written does not usually translate the same way to English. As much as I have always tried to push myself and keep improving, I feel like I have reached a point where I need a small push and guidance to take my writing to the next level. From my high school, I learned a lot of writing technics and have some small grammar lectures every now and then. Writing my research papers, preparing speeches, and all the college essays have given me lots of practice with different writing styles and methods. Yet, I still have not found one that I feel the most confident in. This semester, I truly wish to improve the transitions
I need to state the literary devices in the first paragraph and not miss it. I also need to cite the texts properly. In addition to these errors, there were many parts where I had bad word choice. I only write the words down because that’s what I think fits at that moment and I do not re-read the sentence again to see if the word fits or not. This is why I had a couple problems in terms of word choice. There were also avoidable mistakes like spelling and missing literary device in the opening sentence. If I had avoided these mistakes I could have avoided the drop in my mark. Correspondingly, a big problem with form of writing was that I could not explain a lot of my points and if I cannot do that, then my essay will have weak evidence. This will simply make my essay weak overall since the point of an essay is to provide as much explanation as you can. I also have to see if the pieces of evidences that I am providing are relevant to the point that I am trying to prove, because there is no point in providing information that does not even prove the point. By doing this, there will just be extra writing. Similarly, for spelling errors, next time I should just cross out the misspelled word instead of leaving it which will just result in a lowered mark. Overall many of these mistakes could have been easily avoided by just reading over the essay and carefully looking out for any mistakes or bad word choice.
Over the course of my studies at university, I have grown and learned more about academic writing and numerous writing styles. I believe there is so much room for me to master my writing skills to succeed and complete my degree and improve my academic writing and personal skills through more practice. However, I have become concerned with my first attempt submitting my piece of paper through the online test in the Writers’ Diet diagnostic tool and was labelled ‘flabby’ in my writing. Analysing my errors and referring to the textbook ’Communication Toolkit’ by Grellier and Goerke (2014), also submitting my piece of writing to Grammarly and paper rater I was able to measure my weakness in the area of sentence structure, punctuation and grammar.
There are many ways I would like to improve my writing in the next academic year, but two more specific ways I would like it to improve include; style and communication. I want to improve my style of writing by doing different types, and writing in a more sophisticated way. Communication is something I also would like to improve in my writing in the next academic year, in which I want people to be able to
When I looked back in my paragraph, I decided to elaborate more on how the place impacted me. Also I elaborated more on the place, like how it feels, smells and looks. In my first paragraph I wrote about what I saw when I was walking to school. When I went to my comp fellow we discussed how I can improve my writing, which was by putting more detailed information.
Reading and writing go hand-in-hand. Those who learn to write, write so someone will eventually read it. Those who learn to read, learn to write through reading other people’s work. But, one must first learn how to do one of the following to succeed in both. So, how does one learn to write? The best, most concise, writers develop from avid readers.