How to Write Understandably We’ve all been there. Somebody gives us a paper to peer-review and it’s practically written in Greek. Eager to demonstrate their mastery of English, the author includes sentences like “The intentional obfuscation of one’s premeditation leads invariably to the unfortunate mystification of one’s readership.” What? (In plain English, this sentence means “Using big words to hide your purpose will confuse your reader.”) Spelling errors can hamper your reader’s ability to understand your writing, but so can overwriting your paper. Bloated sentences and big words may lose your reader. If your grammar is too sophisticated for your intended audience, it will backfire. It doesn’t make you look smart to write like that. It …show more content…
Passive sentences use actions that happen to the subject, not actions the subject performs. Examples of passive voice include “The comet was discovered by the scientists,” and “A fire was contained in the canyon.” To make your sentence active, swap the subject (the comet) and the prepositional phrase (the scientists), and remove the filler that’s left (“The scientists discovered the comet.”). You can also add a new subject instead of implying it (“Firefighters contained a fire in the canyon.”). Passive sentences are generally wordier that active sentences, and they’re less clear. However, they are useful when the recipient of an action is more important than the doer of it; for example, “Pit bulls have received a lot of negative publicity,” flows better in passive …show more content…
Too many short sentences can make your essay sound choppy and disjointed, while too many long sentences will make it hard to follow your points. There’s no hard and fast rule for when a sentence must be long and when it must be short, but if your problem is using choppy sentences then consider combining them when you edit your paper. If they’re too long, look for sentences you can split up. Stay away from “zombie nouns.” A “zombie noun,” known formally as a nominalization, is an adjective, verb, or adverb that has been turned into a noun by the addition of –ation, -ing, -ness, or another suffix. Examples include “understanding,” “creation,” and “recklessness.” They’re called zombies because according to linguist Helen Sword, “they cannibalize active verbs, suck the lifeblood from adjectives and substitute abstract entites for human beings.” These words aren’t always bad, but overusing them will quickly confuse your readers, because nominalizations don’t often have subjects attached to them. To cure a zombie epidemic, remove the nominalization and add a subject. Helen Sword provides the following example:
The proliferation of nominalizations in a discursive formation may be an indication of a tendency toward pomposity and
The zombie argument presents an idea meant to prove that consciousness doesn’t necessarily logically supervene on the physical. In this example there exists a zombie, defined as “someone or something physically identical to me ( or any other conscious being) but lacking conscious experiences altogether.” (Chalmers,94) Zombie world is then defined as “a world physically identical to ours,but in which there are no conscious experiences at all. In such a world, everyone is a zombie.” (Chalmers, 94) In this idea, only “phenomenal zombies” are to be considered meaning zombies that are “physically and functionally identical ( as us) , but which lack experience” (Chalmers 95) There are five main arguments that stand behind this idea, the first two being ideas regarding conceivability, the second two arguments of epistemology and the fifth and argument of analysis.
Nevertheless, the most complex level of usage that McCrimmon discusses is the formal level of usage. One point of the formal structure is that the sentences are “relatively long and involved” (193). The sentences in scholarly articles typically follow rules, which makes them more difficult to read than other types of writing. Further, these writings also use “extensive vocabulary” (193). There are often words that most people would not know the meaning of unless they are professionals in that field. In addition, sentences in the formal level “make no attempt to establish
Reading through the whole essay, there are many appealing strategies found in order to strengthen the essay academically. Brooks attracts the audience with a pathos-style strategy, giving specific movie examples to straighten up the essay. The movie Night of the Living Dead resonates the viewers with an image of a flesh-eating and harmful zombie figure instead of a harmless voodoo-created zombie, which makes the notion of zombies transformed into a horrifying figure, provoking the sense of fear of audience with emotional appeal. The revolutionary creation of zombie film was led by George A. Romero, the father of the entirely new horror genre. In his work, zombies are characterized as a form of undead
Personality change, clumsiness, unconsciousness, and the urge to bite. Can all be associated with characteristics of a zombie. This popular phenomenon has been a popular topic in the past decade in films such as “I am Legend” (2007), “Zombieland” (2009), and “World War Z” (2013). And the theme has also even made it into American television such as “The Walking Dead” (2010). Which has caused discussions of can zombies physically exist? Is the idea so farfetched? However, philosophers do not associate zombies with the animated representation of “rotting, flesh-eating, rising from the dead” like they are presented in films and television. In The Stone Reader philosophers have defined zombies as “physically identical to you or me but utterly lacking in internal subjective experience” (Catapano., Peter, & Critchley., Simon, 2016, p.296). Which brings us back to the opening sentence, all these characteristics that we associate with zombies are symptoms of sleeping sickness, sleep walking and rabies along with many more diseases that have the characteristics of a zombie. Similarly, how philosophers have defined what a zombie is, philosophical arguments such as dualism, materialism, and epiphenomenalism can prove that it is possible that zombies can physically exist in our world.
Zombies aren’t supposed to exist. But what if they do, and we interact with them every day? Chuck Klosterman’s essay, “My Zombie, Myself”, compares everyday life to the task of killing zombies. Through elaborate metaphors, quotes from zombie experts, and a strong call to action, he successfully appeals to pathos, ethos and logos to convince his readers. Klosterman argues that even though modern life is monotonous, it is possible to escape the monotony.
Purpose: The mindless actions carried out in the modern world are tiresome and numerous and unless it is contained, individuals will have their motivations drained until they degrade to nothing but the metaphorical concept of a zombie.
Society today is quick to judge and state what is wrong and what is acceptable by the public. While some differences between Spelling Matters and Use Your Own Words are obvious, the similarities are relevant. Anne Trubek says that perhaps it is time to change or alter grammar rules to match the current generation and culture. We should advance our guidelines about what is proper and improper along with what is happening right now with the language. While Mikita Brottman says, “bad spelling can be a godsend—a way of weeding out those who are thoughtless and inattentive to detail” (p. 219).
The main purpose in the correct use of grammar, punctuation and spelling is ensuring the receiver of the information reads it accurately. Addition to this when given a task to do, your employer expects you to do it perfectly. When a document has inaccuracies, readers tend to distrust everything, including the statistics, opinions, and facts. This would be relayed back to my employer who would themselves lose confidence in our ability. For progression in my company I need to ensure I carry out all tasks to a certain standard.
AHHHHhhhhhh........! Imagine being awakened by a soft, distance scream. Wide awake, the world returns to being silent except for a racing heartbeat. Suddenly, a soft resonating moan starts to fill the empty air of the bedroom. Looking out the window, the world is an eerie grey with nothing moving but the occasional garbage blowing in the wind. Suddenly the horizon begins to change as a crowd of people begin to emerge. Watching nervously, the figures get closer and turn into something much more menacing. They are all disease-invested, flesh-rotted, brain-hungry zombies! Where did these undead monsters come from? How do they survive? What
It is clear that zombies are the outcomes of a given infectious disease
Grammar, spelling and punctuation all play an important role in the relationship between the writer and the reader. Grammatically correct texts are easier to read. Also, when you have a proper understanding of grammar is also makes the writing process
Having heard rumors of a deadly, virulent, and unstoppable virus that mercilessly turns its victims into zombies, it is essential that all ethical issues must be addressed regarding the “life” of the undead; which brings up existential concerns that forces us to question and define what’s really alive. Modern motion pictures have dramatized zombies to the point where they are depicted as superhumans with outstanding abilities used to solve complex problems in order to catch their human prey, in reality, however, they are simply humans who have been infected, killed and reanimated by a virus. Yet, “...when is it appropriate to say someone’s ‘as-good-as-dead,’ which is an awful, difficult decision (Source A)?” Sadly, a zombie may bear resemblance
My terminology on zombies is that they are not alive what so ever , zombies are more like puppet with strings moving their bodies.Zombies do not think,feel, nor have any personality. According to The Walking Dead, a synapse is electric impulses that carry all the messages.It contains experience ,memory, everything in a person life. Synapses determine everything a person say ,does or think from the moment the person is born to the moment the person dies .Adding on , when this someone was bitten and infected ,a virus invades the brain like meningitis and causes them to die .Moreover, some type of energy reset the brain stem that allows them to walk and move,The brainstem does not bring back the experience and memory.In order to be alive, you
As a matter of fact, passive voice is not widely used as active. However, in some cases like acadamic writing, passive is the chosen over active.