Revise

I chose to revise assignments number two and three because they were my two favorite assignments out of the three we did during the semester. I felt that they were unique in the sense that I had never been asked to do something like this in an English class before. It is important to enjoy the assignments that you revise because the process takes a lot of time and effort. A writer must be fully engaged with his pieces to be able to revise effectively. I also think that they will allow me to work

For the revision of The Wedding, I used the rubic and the instructor’s critiques. I changed the opening into an attention getter suggested by the instructor. I also chose the perspective of the main character to add more depth to the poem. I took the dramatic tension and gave more life to that so I could tie it into the character’s perspective. I changed the ending to make it more effective for this poem using the thirteen ways of looking at revision. For the revision of The Bra, I used

as I will stay in one period of time and not follow one main character throughout, but instead travel through the town and into each of the townspeople’s lives. I think this is by far my strongest piece of writing, and something I will continue to revise and work through throughout my writing career. Lemon Water- Previously Shag Carpets and Circular Saws, I changed this story quite a bit. Before, it felt like two different stories vying for attention. I eliminated the murder scene and added

MOU/MOA. Therefore, we need to revise the risk and add another. Revise Risk #5 “BMV does not transfer data required by MOU/MOA for data, hindering another agency impacting the BMV reputation.” Add Risk “Other agency does not transfer data required by MOU/MOA for data, hindering the BMV operations.” There should be separate controls for if we comply or if the other agency comply with the MOU/MOA. Therefore, we need to revise the risk and add another. Revise Risk #6 “BMV does not comply with

Writing is an immensely important aspect of life, that as a society we use every day, whether we know it or not. Writing is the process in which people communicate their thoughts, emotions, and feelings through words. Writing is both informal, which would be everyday writing such as: texting, tweeting, emailing, etc. Writing is also formal, this would include: essays, research reports review articles, etc. Through feedback from my instructor and my peers my views on writing have changed since taking

William Zinsser is an American writer who wrote an informational guide to writing. He made a decision to revise a specific chapter called Simplicity. In the year 1980, the first version of Simplicity was created, then came 1998 followed up by 2006. In the first version, 1980, Zinsser created a long and wordy paper. He used specific examples but included details that were unnecessary. This is ironic because the paper is about how writers can write unnecessary words and phrases creating complicated

how I raised my bar. I took sentences I had written and moved, created, and formed an essay that was different and better then the first draft; by creating a story. Now using all the knowledge, I have learned throughout the semester, I can use it revise my essay one

overall weakness includes having some unclear explanation of thoughts, unclear topic sentences, confusing thesis statements, having undefined terms, difficulties transitioning from one idea to another. I have learned that to have a good essay, I must revise my papers more than once because there are always flaws that can be fixed or improved. My writing process has evolved from having difficulties writing down or explaining my thought process to being able to explain and clarify examples to help support

3. Revise to eliminate dangling expressions. Revise these sentences to eliminate dangling expressions. a. Driving through Chicago in the fog, the street signs were hard to read. The fog in Chicago made the street signs hard to read. b. The Federal Reserve banks maintain excellent relations with the major financial institutions, but they are still not doing as much as they had expected. The Federal Reserve banks are not doing what they expected and maintain excellent relations with major financial

Writing is an art that you either love or hate in a sense. My time as a student in the past use to be the type that despised writing after the knowledge I gained from this course that has really changed. The problem came was not knowing how to revise my writings. Revising is a tool that is just as important in developing a paper than writing it. I was the type of author to think everything I wrote was perfect and wouldn’t take revising as a serious step. With this drawback fixed I’ve taken huge notice