Sep. 26, 2016 10:05
Here is my revision. I hope it's better.
PART ONE:
She was not a talkative woman. She would sit there under the night sky and focus at the mosquito rooting into her arm, slowly raise her other hand and slap it. She never missed and she never wiped off the carcass, instead she left it there for bait. I sat by this strange woman and watch her kill thirty to forty mosquitoes. I watched her and watched her waiting for her to say something, but she never did.
"There’s quite a lot of mosquitoes here madam."
"You bet!"
"What did you say, I couldn't quite hear you there?"
You BET!"
Then she cheered up, and turned around and said:
If I didn't know better, I'd say you were deaf and dumb. Oh gosh, I did say it. I've drank and drank and drank loads of whiskey and wondered why I was in pain so much. First I wondered why
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Like we made it and all but we weren't so happy. So we thought and we like went on this ship after we talked about our problem. So we were like on the ship and the weather got like really bad and we were falling on top of each other and stuff like the weather was bad and all.
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