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Cape Cod: A Short Story

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Sep. 26, 2016 10:05

Here is my revision. I hope it's better.

PART ONE:

She was not a talkative woman. She would sit there under the night sky and focus at the mosquito rooting into her arm, slowly raise her other hand and slap it. She never missed and she never wiped off the carcass, instead she left it there for bait. I sat by this strange woman and watch her kill thirty to forty mosquitoes. I watched her and watched her waiting for her to say something, but she never did.

"There’s quite a lot of mosquitoes here madam."

"You bet!"

"What did you say, I couldn't quite hear you there?"

You BET!"

Then she cheered up, and turned around and said:

If I didn't know better, I'd say you were deaf and dumb. Oh gosh, I did say it. I've drank and drank and drank loads of whiskey and wondered why I was in pain so much. First I wondered why …show more content…

Like we made it and all but we weren't so happy. So we thought and we like went on this ship after we talked about our problem. So we were like on the ship and the weather got like really bad and we were falling on top of each other and stuff like the weather was bad and all.

6. In this class we ask you to use American Standard English with modern conventional grammar, spelling, punctuation, vocabulary. There are other contexts in which it's important to use the same kind of formal English. What are the advantages of using this kind of formal English instead of writing or speaking casually with slang and informal grammar?

Sometimes there are some foreigners in our class who learned the Standard English language, so to speak in slang, or to write conversation in slang will make those people have difficulties understanding. Sometimes, if people use slang to others who don’t know it, they may misunderstand it and may get offended. That’s why using Standard English in class is very important. This way we can communicate knowing everyone

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