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Creative Writing: Moving Into A Haunted House

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David wasn't happy about moving, especially moving into a haunted house. Well, he wasn't sure that it was haunted. After all, he'd only ever seen it in a single picture. But David knew that an old house out in the middle of nowhere, surrounded by nothing but trees, could never mean anything good. Mom decided to move after Dad had left with Marie. David didn't know Marie, but he still hated her. Anyone who made Mom cry couldn't be nice; Mom was the nicest lady David knew. However, as nice as she was, Mom couldn't have chosen a worse house! It was the ideal house for a haunting. Danny even said that it looked haunted. Danny was David's older brother; he was starting high school in August so he had to know what he was talking about. When Danny said that the house looked haunted, Mom got mad at him. Usually David agreed with Mom, but, for once, Danny was right. The house did look haunted. But there wasn't anything that he could do to convince Mom to turn around the car. David was stuck moving into a haunted house. In the front seat, Danny was scowling at Mom, he wasn't any happier about the move than David, not that it made him feel any better. He couldn't see Mom, but she'd been excited about the move for weeks, so there was no question of how she felt about it. David …show more content…

It must have been hours he had lain awake, a knot in his belly. Then he heard something. It couldn't have been Danny, it sounded like paw steps. David forced himself to stay perfectly still, he didn't even breathe. Just outside the door, he could hear the skittering of claws. He could hear the paw steps again, coming closer and closer until he could hear heavy breathing. He could smell it too; it stank of an odor that David had smelt before. The raccoon, the creature's breath smelled like rotten meat. Eventually the monster moved away, David must have been able to drift off at some point, because he awoke to sunlight coming in through the dust-caked

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