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Creative Writing: Six Flags

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“MOM WHERE ARE WE GOING!!!” I said, feeling like I could burst at any moment it's a horrible thing to be car sick when you don't know what to do about it. “Don't worry dolly we will be there any second now” said Sharon, but I just know her as mom. “I think i'm dying!” I said, sinking into the back car seat. Mom didn't say anything as with my brother they just smiled. I wondered if they could see something I couldn't so I forced my body to sit up and unbuckle my seatbelt as my eyes lit up as if I saw an angel. It felt like everything was in slow motion. For months now I've been dying to go to Six Flags for one day and today was that day! “Do you feel better deer or should we go back home” mom said with an evil smile glancing at me through …show more content…

Going to Six Flags for your family might not be a big, deal but for the Normans it was Our Adventure! As soon as we pulled up me and my brother Spencer jumped out of the car like we were bungee jumping, although I still kinda felt really sick, but there was no time to chicken out and ruin this perfect day so I sucked it up and went with it. We took the Six Flags bus to get closer to the park. The bus had a circle in the middle that spun so I asked my mom if I could sit there and she said, yes! They were sitting in the front of the bus where I couldn't see them but it didn't matter. I felt like I was already on a roller coaster because every time he would turn a corner I would go flying. I looked out the window and saw the most beautiful tree I have ever laid my blue eyeballs on, in my life. All I could think of is I will never see a tree that beautiful in my life! After what feels like an hour on the bus I get really sick and tired of the “pretend rollercoaster” so I look out the window to see another really pretty tree! “My goodness they have a lot of beautiful trees” I say under my breath and think nothing of it. A few more minutes go by and the …show more content…

Its as if the world we live in the world that surrounds me has stopped like i'm all alone with a muffled sound of music ringing in my ears drowning everything. I notice i'm cold and it's very windy i feel goosebumps impending to my skin. I feel the wind cradle each individual hair on my head. The people around me are all smiling as if they are so cheerful. I wonder if I have a big smirk on my face as them I suddenly feel an empty feeling in my stomach like there is something missing I try to investigate this feeling and realize I must me hungry because I haven't eaten. “-wasn't that so much fun! Rebecca. . . Rebecca. . .” someone shakes me forcefully “I can't believe it, you haven't been listening to be this entire time!” “What, no, No, ya I heard you you were talking about the-the thing you know. . .” I trail off because I really wasn't listening. My brother just rooles his eyes and doesn't say anything. I just say sorry and nearly jump out of my skin and look up to see the sky is black with bright stars dancing when all of a sudden a gust of wind blows my hair backwards and I see my next adventure. My brother and I give the same we-are-forcing-you-on-this-ride-no-matter-what look. She starts backing up shaking her head and laughing like she's insane. “ You're out of your minds if you think that i'm riding on

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