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Frank Bruni's Article On Suicide In Schools

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Expert Frank Bruni created a believable article stressing the idea that teens overstress over anything that regards to school, whether it be their grades, stride to follow in the expectations of others and themselves, being active, staying in sports, or attending every club a school may offer. I believe in this article due to its use of statistical evidence from other schools and colleges as well as Bruni’s personal experience. The article does have one major hitch that holds it back from becoming credible to most. This hitch is the lack of statistical evidence from a variety of other schools and backgrounds. Bruni, from statistics, attempts to prove his point that students overstress when it comes to school. Bruni used evidence collected from a story by Julie Scelfo which presents that during a thirteen month period six students committed suicide while attending the University of Pennsylvania. Scelfo goes on to explain …show more content…

Bruni’s main weakness is his lack in variety of evidence. Therefore, Bruni could solve this problem by adding more statistic information from other colleges and even high schools so that the article could apply to a wider audience. This statistical evidence could also help more people connect to his idea. Other than this main hitch Bruni has a very compelling article. Overall Bruni’s article is rather compelling, although there are clearly not enough evidence to further this article’s credibility. This could easily be resolved with the addition of more statistical evidence provided by a variety of schools at different levels of academics instead of just schools at a college level. The articles strengths shine through with its current use of statistics, even with the lack of variety. Once resolved, this article could easily appeal to a wider audience and even allow more to believe in the argument Bruni attempts to

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