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How Hummer Changed My Life

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1. I will be the first to admit that I am NOT an accomplished writer nor will I ever be. I also have to say that I have learned a lot from my very short time in these classes that have guided me in preparing a better paper. In the past, I never even knew about the 5 paragraph essay format. I have always looked at thing that I have written and thought that I could have written it different. I didn't have to turn anything in, either for school or work purposes so there was absolutely no need to revise. I am not sure if Nancy Sommer's article changed much about what I have done in the past. I know that my College English Professor did. I took what has been taught to me and I incorporate it as much as I can into what I am doing. I read aloud to …show more content…

In essay 1, I tried to show that two people with completely different backgrounds and cultures can still effectively communicate under the right circumstances.

" He looks up and sees me and points at a bolt. I look at it and shrug my shoulders as if I am not sure what he needs. He holds up 10 fingers and I go to the tool box and get the appropriate wrench and socket. I show him both and he points to the one he wants." shows that without saying a word, he told me what he needed and I could understand what he didn't say. If I had to guess, I would say this was the most effective use of description, whereas the least effective was more in the paragraph about me writing down what I saw him doing.

"He inputs more codes and the machine starts going through a self-test mode. I watch and write down whatever I can so that the next time this happens, I can do it without him. He sees me doing this and looks at what I am writing. He looks at it, but I don't know how much of it he can really read." It was hard to use a lot of description to illustrate the act of writing down instructions that I was interpreting from him. This essay could have easily been longer and more detailed but the most important parts had to come out in the space

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