My Writing Feedback

Now that your project schedule has been created and your resources have been allocated, please analyze your results and answer the following essay questions. In your

Feedback is provided in relation to the assessment criteria (box on left) that were given to you with the assessment specification.

Why is it important to be objective when receiving feedback? How might you use feedback to revise your rough draft to make it as effective as possible?

I would not have spent as much time on the outline as I did if I had to do this project again. Initially, I went about this project like it was a

Also remember that writing is process which takes time to perfect. English has never been one of my favorite subjects, mainly just because I never really consider myself to be a good writer and by the normal standard I may not be. In a sense though, I found contrary to my belief that my writing wasn’t all that bad. Now it took time for me to see that for myself, because

Could you please make the amendments, remove my highlighted text, proof read and spell check your work and re-submit this unit by 19/10/15.

By encouraging others to give their feedback gives me the opportunity to see ways of improvement from a different perspective to my own. A colleague’s perspective may highlight work

After reading the reviews and going over my conversation paper, I want to add a ton more detail and explaination to most of my paper. I will also try to make the conversation parts bolder. When I wrote the paper I didn't have the experience I do now, so I can see alot of places that should be edited.

Response to Feedback Statement The feedback from Scientific Writing Assignment 1 provided me an insight of the areas I need to improve on when writing scientific reports. The main theme of feedback was I was not descriptive enough, particularly in the assignment title and research aims. To avoid this from occurring again I asked other people to read through my work and asked them if more information need to be provided to improve the readers understanding of the experiment. Another area I improved on was the layout of the results through figures and tables.

I'm always open to feedback and have asked for feedback many times. I don't feel I've gotten as much feedback as I'd like. I have also asked a number of my direct reports how I could do my job better for them. I've made a number of changes based on their feedback. I feel like I could improve my efforts to solicit feedback from those I work with outside the MDC.

When I stop to think about the memory’s that I have made during my first semester of college; there are both good and bad pieces or times that present themselves. Often with many things there are gray areas, and writing would fall in there for me. I fortunately understand now that I have times where I can over look many of my writing flaws. Such as sentence structure! This by far was my biggest problem in this class, and I fully understand why. Personally I have times that will type up a paragraph and never notice the mistake. That is until someone points it out to me. It’s almost like my brain knows that something is wrong with it, but for some unknown reason it won’t register when I’m revising my paper. So as a writer I have realized that I need to take advantage of people around me and get their feedback on my essay’s; because

First, what pleases me about this writing piece was that it took me time to write it. I tried something new where I came together with my teacher,

As the semester started, I had set my mind that I was destined to achieve a lot. During the start of the semester, I had several difficulties writing English assignments especially in terms of grammar. During the first week of the semester, I sat down, organized my thoughts and comprehended that throughout the semester, I had to achieve all that I had planned for. As a student of English, I had planned that throughout the semester, I had to improve my skills as a scholar, writer and critical thinker. Now that the semester has ended, I can reflect all the semester activities to depict how my writing skills and critical thinking skills have drastically improved. This paper presents a reflection paper of how this

I feel that the biggest change to my writing this semester is in the way I organize myself for assignments. I was homeschooled and did all my assignments online. Making the change to a classroom environment was difficult for me due to my Asperger’s and learning about how to organize all aspects of my writing has been a challenge. I feel that I have improved as the semester progressed. I would like to discuss each aspect of the writing process and how my skills have improved by taking this class. I will be able to use the organizational process in my future career as a film maker and director.

My writing skills which I have worked on over the few months I have been in English 102 have changed quite a bit in my opinion. There are many things which I have improved upon that were amongst my weaker writing skills when the year began. On the opposite side of that point, there are also many things which I still need to improve upon if I want to truly elevate my writing to a level that I will be confident in. Finally, I have gained new skills outside of writing from this class, particularly the activities which we did in class at various points throughout the year. These things all cumulate together to give me an appreciation of English courses which I did not previously have.