Personal Narrative Analysis

On the morning of Christmas, the girls found gifts for each of them. Their father want them to feel upset before he will say his surprise; they are suppose to go to Disneyland. All three of them was very excited but still crying from the gifts that they received. They

One day Twyla’s parents sent her by herself to visit her grandmother who lived on a farm far away. Twyla’s father told her that she would be a big help to her grandmother and she would be meeting new friends. Twyla liked the idea of having someone new to play with. She packed her bag and said her good byes and away she flew.

She had put on her most beautiful jewelry. I didn't quite understand why, but she looked stunning. A couple of hours later she came back down. “Oh it was so wonderful,” she exclaimed to Coralia, “The skies up above were infinitely blue with a promising sunshine, and the golden sand with waves crashing onto them were just remarkable! Oh Coralia you wouldn't believe how phenomenal it was!” she exclaimed to Coralia. Oh how jealous Coralia was that everyone else got to go up to the land before her. She went up to her mother and asked if she could go up, she begged and pleaded, but her mother replied how she always did, “You must wait a year to go up, for you are only 12. You would be reckless and get spotted and we do not want that, now do we.” Coralia shook her head and left to go back to her room to weep. She thought her mother was being fully unfair. She hoped this year went by

Thea had this dream of going in the Titanic. Addison says that she is going to go on the Titanic go to and see family, but she said that she was not going to take Thea or Lily because she did not want them to go, she said that she needs some time away from Thea and Lily. Thea really wishes that she could have gone with her mom, she really miss

It was just another day Proserpina and her mom was eating breakfast. Proserpina asked her mom if she could go with her friends to the seaside her mom told her "NO, you cannot I told you never to go near seaside trust me I want the best for you also. " Proserpina was not happy she wanted to go to the seaside with her friends. When it was night Proserpina snuck out of the house. When she arrived there she was the first one so she walked near the seaside.

On a beautiful evening of summer, Jemima’s mother took her for a walk along the shore in a warm evening day. It was strange, the sun had never been up that high for that time of the day. A cloudy blue sky opens up to let a little girl to a new world. Her feet sink into the shiny and soft sand leaving marks behind every single step. The little girls name is Jemima, this story had been told when she was 6 years old.

She leapt to her feet as if she was ready to bolt any minute. The teacher grabbed a tissue box from a cabinet that sat next to the heavy door. She handed the box to Margot, but she didn’t accept it instead she stood up and said, “ Seven more years…” The teacher went up to Margot and grabbed her shoulders and told her that she will call Margot’s parents.

This is a story about a little lost girl who wanted to find herself. One bright and sunny afternoon in 2008, the little girl’s mom told her three children, “We are going to Philadelphia for vacation at your grandma's house.”

Once upon a time there was a girl with fair skin, brown eyes, long hair who was a named Cinderella. She used to live with her mother and one older brother in a little house, however, every weekend she would go back to hostel to attend college. Cinderella mother and older brother would treat her very nicely as they would take care of her like a princess. One day, Cinderella, and her whole family was invited for a family party at her aunt place, but Cinderella was not able to make it to the party as she did not have any way to get back home from the college as she do not have her any transportation or ride back home which she could have used to come back to her place to attend it. Because of the transportation problem, Cinderella could not attend her aunt’s party at back home. Cinderella was made to stay at hostel to study as there was no other way she could have made it. So, her whole family to the party, leaving Cinderella alone at hostel.

Camille started her online school. She had seven classes and lunch, which was cooked by her mom. Grandma would come and visit her in her room regularly. Trying to help and talking about the new house. When it was lunch time Camille went downstairs and devoured her instant noodles her mom made. It was really salty and soggy, but it was better than nothing.

“If only I was a pretty princess,” she whispered gently. Gloria gulped. She glanced at her reflection through the glass window. “I would do anything..” she thought. Tomorrow was Gloria’s birthday but instead of being excited she dreaded it. It marked another year she had been without her parents. As the sun went down she gazed over the city. With a sigh, Gloria closed the curtains and slowly got in bed. A single tear ran down her cheek as she slipped under the

“If only I was a pretty princess,” she whispered gently. Gloria gulped. She glanced at her reflection through the glass window. “I would do anything..” she thought. Tomorrow was Gloria’s birthday but instead of being excited she dreaded it. It marked another year she had been without her parents. As the sun went down she gazed over the city. With a sigh, Gloria closed the curtains and slowly got in bed. A single tear ran down her cheek as she slipped under the

At the end of the school year Lily’s parents told all the kids that they will be going to South Dakota in a big RV in July. It was a couple months away, but they were excited. A month later they found the RV they wanted.

No one had answered Gracelynn and she had started to get very worried, so she walked out of her room and no one was home. She had then realized that the storm had ended and it was very bright and sunny, but then she remembered that it was only one in the morning. Gracelynn had become very confused, so she tried to use the phone, but it didn't work. She then decided to walk outside to see what was happening.

The whole family had come to town. They all had met at the hospital to go see her. Everyone raced to the ICU to see with their own eyes the condition she was in. Tommy, her husband, warned everyone,