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Personal Narrative Essay: Ricardo's Father

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The night of June 14, a son, Oscar tan skin, black hair, 6 ft. tall, had been promised a deer heart for lunch that day by his father, Ricardo. But on that same exact day, no heart, no deer was brought to the table. Oscar looks down on his father, and Ricardo looks up at him, Oscar with his piercing eyes, full of hate, had gone on a rampage, running toward the forest, banging his hand against his head, he was “en candela”. Oscar had been craving deer heart all that week, this was the 5th time Ricardo had promised him. He had just about enough with his lies. Walking in the middle of the forest between Colombia and Venezuela called llanos, in circles, just thinking. Oscar had just rung up an idea. He heads toward town, its pitch black out, walking …show more content…

Oscar barges in with a huge bang. Screaming and sobbing at his father, “LIAR, YOU LIAR, YOU PRA-PRA-PROMISED!”, his father trying to explain “I’m sorry my son, the hunt didn't go well today”, Ricardo tried to explain but this fearful tears caught up to his words. Oscar bursting in rage “STOP LYING TO ME!” Oscar walked towards his father mumbling random words, not understanding a word that came out of his mouth, pulls up his knife, points it toward his father, and says in a soft smooth but raging voice “You have lied. Don’t you know lying is a sin? You shall sin no more, father”, he said stabbing his father in the chest, not once but several times, until he was dead. Chopping every limb of his body, putting it in the bag and taking it to the llanos. When he arrived, he lit a match and a fire to cook him. Waiting. In the middle of no where. Two hunters get a glimpse of the murder scene. They run back to the pueblo, and tell the police, and to warn everyone else in the Pueblo. A group of hunters, ready and fully armored, go out and search for Oscar. Oscar hears them changing “COME OUT OSCAR” several times, but does nothing. …show more content…

What Oscar didn't know was that there was more. Euly grabs chili pepper, he looks at the bottle of chili pepper, nods his head and says “Oscar the thing about Chili pepper is that its no only good and spicy for food, but it also burns and causes pain,” Euly bends down, looks into his eyes and yells “YOU DESERVE TO BE IN PAIN.” Euly dunks an entire bottle of chili pepper onto his wounds. Oscar yelling in pain, strangling, trying to get out. The crowd around him lifts up the candle of the Virgin Mary, and start chanting “OUR FARTHER WHO ARENT IN HEVEN…” Oscar yelling, screeching, the crowd still chanting “HAIL MARY, MOTHER OF GOD PRAY FOR OUR SINNERS…” Oscar quiets down, crowd starts to leave, Euly unties Oscar, hoping he learned his lesson. Oscar not being able to move, lying on the ground ,scars marking his body, crying for help. Oscar slowly dying on the floor, everyone goes back into there homes. The next day, Oscar was no longer to be found on the ground, no one cared to discover where he went, but late at night it is to be told that Oscar roams the streets whistling, scraping his sword on the ground, and if you dare to stop and listen you wont see the daylight of

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