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Personal Narrative: He's Dead

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Jaden Ockert Mrs. Kuehlke Writing Workshop November 2017 Title? He’s dead. I can’t believe it. How could this happen, why him why me. How could I live my self-knowing someone had killed my best friend and I couldn't do anything about it. When Will’s parents told me, I went straight down on the floor crying and couldn’t stop. The Police said they are on the case but it’s not definite. The only evidence was a swiss army knife with Will’s blood on it. I decided that the only thing that I could do is find the killer. I first want to start off with suspects. It was hard because Will didn't talk to many people or have many friends. He did have some school bullies so I'll start off with them. I was so determined to find the killer that at home …show more content…

Ocean was named Ocean because her eyes were so blue that they looked like the ocean. I never liked Nathan very much I don’t know why I just didn't. He gave me the heeby-jeebies. Will would like to do things like going to the arcade with them, he liked to go the movies or do homework with them. I never like to hang out a lot with them because they always did the same things. I wanted to try new thing and do new things. Nathan always gave me a funny feeling. He would always try to steal Will away from me and keep secrets from me but I ignored it. But now those secrets can give me some clues to why Will was killed. I called Ocean and Nathan to meet at my house at 4:00 to discuss what happened to Will. Ocean came to my house at 3:50. As we were waiting on Nathan I was trying to make some conversation with Ocean while we were waiting on Nathan. “I wonder when Nathan is gonna get here?” I said. “Well, I did come early. Besides Nathan is late to almost everything.” Ocean said sounding annoyed. Nathan rang the doorbell at 4:15 exactly. Ocean and I jogged over to the door and opened it. We both said hello to him as he stepped inside. He sat down on the couch with a grunt. He said; “ What do you want to talk about?” “Well, I just wanted to talk about what happened to Will. If you know any secrets about him that could potentially lead us to the killer?” “NO. What am I doing here? This is a complete and utter waste of my time.”

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