Personal Narrative: My Trip To Disney

As an 8-year-old child, the worlds scary place. Everywhere you look there’s something terrifying. From people the size of giants, roaming the streets, with no care what so ever with their surroundings or just realizing that in a few years would come the most difficult and emotionally unstable time of my life. Sure, those things may be slightly exaggerated, but what I do know is the most horrendous experience I had in the land of joy that ultimately ruined my love Disney for many years.

We went on a trip to florida for spring break of 2016 and we went to disney world when we were down there. We stayed for 7 days and we had so much fun because we went magic kingdom, animal kingdom and hollywood studios also epcot to. Today was are last day in florida and we planned nothing to do so we could sit back and relax because we are leaving tonight at 8:00 . Today we are gonna just go eat breakfast and then maybe go swimming and hang out. We have to go to a time chair place because they give some tickets for disney world.

I was seven, I was in the hospital for two weeks because my appendix had just ruptured. I was 7 and the last time I went to Disney I was 2 or 4, I really don’t remember that’s the reason why I went because I didn’t remember it the parks or the rides or anything. What type of parents takes their 2 year old kid to Disney World? I mean seriously would you take you kid at that young of an age. My grandfather also realized that life was too short so he told my parents that he would take us to Disney World, but he said he would only pay for me and that my mom, dad, and my brother would have to pay for themselves.

I never knew that I was a part of something bigger than a backup, but I turned out to be. Now the fate of every sliver of good magic Walt Disney ever dreamed up rests on me-me and the team, I should say. I suppose it all started, that everything changed at midnight.

It was amazing, we didn't go on the many rides but the ride that I remember most was going on space mountain. It was so fun, we got whipped around corners so fast it felt like we were gonna fall off the track, and the ride was pitch dark besides the little lights placed to make it look like you're in a tunnel. Most of the time we walked around, and we watched the parade. On the second day we went to animal kingdom, it was so cool. In animal kingdom there are different sections that are different countries so it was kinda confusing but still fun. I liked how every country had different food related to that country. We went on the safari and I got lot of photos of the animals. The funnest part of animal kingdom was going on mount everest. I had never been on a roller coaster that big, I was really scared but once it started going it was so much fun. Bailey on the other hand hated the ride, at one part it goes backwards really fast and she couldn't breathe, so after that ride she was scared of roller coasters for a while, but she got over it eventually. On the third day my grandpa wasn't feeling good so he stayed at the hotel and had to miss the best park, epcot. When we first got to epcot we went to the coral reef restaurant, It was so good. It was also really cool that you got to watch the fish and sharks while you ate. Even though there went any seats available near the aquarium, it was still really good. Our waiter was very nice too, we offered to make us a smoothie that wasn't even on the menu, which were so good I can't even describe it. After we went to go on the rides at epcot so me and bailey went on mission earth, which was a ride that you had to go to the moon in a spaceship but you got to steer the ship. After we got off the ride my grandma felt sick and we had to go back to the hotel sadly. Unfortunately the fourth day was our last day, so we just hung around in the hotel till we

Disney World and SeaWorld. Soon that’s where we would be heading. I was only in 2nd grade but I still remember how Heather, Sara, Sierra, Grandma, Grandpa, and I packed into our four-door, red 2000 Dodge Durango. We all were so excited. I was bouncing up and down in my seat even though I had just awakened. I didn't sleep much the night before neither did my sisters nor had my cousin.

I get in line and I start mentally preparing myself for the adventure that awaits me. The music starts; then stops. I look to my friend Grier for reassurance.I ask her,”What is going on?”.She replied,”I have no idea”.Then the music starts and the parade begins! (again) I start walking with the other UCA All American Cheerleaders.The streets of disney are cleared for the first time in a long time. Severel parents doing whatever they can to take the “perfect” picture.My friends and I see parents yelling their childs names

Senior year is the time in one’s life that they have been waiting for, for forever. The thoughts had been conjuring since they stepped out those doors on the last day of junior year. There are tons of things to do and it seems endless. Along with the things to do, are the things most can’t wait to do. From taking senior pictures, senior pep rallies, football games, sports and clubs.They enjoy all this because it is the last because this is the last year to do all of that and all of the in between. But other than the biggest being graduation is Senior Trip! The only difference for me was that I went on my senior trip to the beautiful and sunny California. And to make it even 10 times better I got to go with my older brother. While there I couldn’t of imagined anything better. From going to Disneyland, to all of the insanely beautiful scenery and let’s not forget just all the amazing new experiences in general.

If I had to choose two words to describe myself, they would be intense and curious. If I had to choose a place that brought out these qualities in me the best, it would be Walt Disney World. A family vacation to Disney World is the perfect trip for me. While most people consider vacations to be relaxing, the perfect vacation for me is one that takes months to plan and days that consist of waking up early and not stopping until well past dark. This is exactly what Walt Disney World is to me.

A memory from my childhood that I can recall is the time when my older cousin, Marc, had taken all the younger cousins, including myself, to Disneyland. We had spent the entire day there, but I can only recall fragments of the day —the gloomy morning, the antsy car ride, and the thrill of Tower of Terror, for example.

January was a mostly successful month. During soccer conditioning, I felt more in-shape like I had hoped at the beginning of the month. I also, thankfully, noticed an increase of fruit in my lunches. Sometimes I shift a little to potato chips, but it’s not my fault people made junk food taste so good! As for my responsibility goal… nothing really improved. I still complain about chores and put off my homework until last minute, but I hope to change that in future months.

During my freshmen year, my family decided that we were going to go on a cruise for Christmas, instead of buying presents. Two weeks before Christmas break, I left school early and we drove all the way to Miami, Florida. I went with my brother and sister, my parents, my grandparents, my aunt and uncle and their kids. M aunt and uncle and their kids flew to Miami, but the rest of us drove. We stayed in a hotel that was kind of on the ghetto side of town, and I found a baby roach in the hallway. The day after we got there, we went and swam on the beach for the first time in my life. The waves were so strong, that I go picked up and dragged fifteen feet and smacked into the older guy’s legs. The taste of salt water is so vile and I ended up being really thirsty after we were done.

One of the most impacting moments in which I have actually witness first hand the way people attempt to judge a human being for being different was the moment a stepped in the united states, growing up in my country I had never noticed the way people can be discriminated by their differences.

I treasured it when my parents took me to Disney World. One of my favorite places I visited as a child, as well. One of the things that caught my attention with this rough draft is how you did so well with using transitional phrases. This is something I need to work on and you a really good at using these in this essay. You achieved using the right amount of words as instructed. You also did your MLA format correctly from what I see. The only thing catching my eye would be your title. Keep it the same as your body of the essay. Do not italicize your title. My spelling suggestions would be to change “in to” to “into” in the sentence starting with “My family and I just went...” This is the only thing I saw as far as spelling goes. My Grammar

It was the moment where I knew I am starting to become an adult. "The World is Yours" is my motivate phrase when I started to attend college. As a child, I was grateful for what my family gave me like toys, money, or anything a child wants. My mom will always call me "Sweetie" or "Mama" which they are my nicknames for when I get happy or when I get sad. I grew up in New York where I had my childhood living where I used to go to the park, spend time with my cousins, my grandfather picking me up from school and watch cartoons. It was that point in my life where I knew I grew up as an adult with lessons that three Disney movies have taught me.