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Personal Narrative-River Rafting In California

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“For a minute, I thought that I was going to lose more of my family,” my grandmother, Vonnie Dynes, said. In the summer of 2013, my parents, brother, sister, 60-year-old grandparents, and I were set to go on vacation to San Francisco, California. We were going to see a San Francisco Giants baseball game and go to Alcatraz Island, a national park that used to hold some of the most dangerous criminals in the United States. After packing all of our luggage into our red, 2010 Nissan Armada, we were ready to leave my Southern California home and drive up the coast of California. Before reaching our final destination, we decided to stop in Central California to do an activity that we had never tried before: river rafting. “I was thinking that …show more content…

According to the LA Times, 12-13 people die per year in the Kern River. We were then instructed on what to do if we were to fall in the Kern River while rafting. Our guide told us to perform the “California Lounge Chair Position.” The safety technique consists of floating down the river on your back with your arms crossed until calm waters are reached. I remember my grandfather paying especially close attention to the words of our guide. A little while later, it was time to head over to the …show more content…

My entire family had a great time, and it felt great to have the cool water splash inside of the raft. Our guide made sure that we did not hit any rocks along the way. Next, we ate lunch and drove back up the river so we could go experience the class II rapids. Confident as ever, we were all ready to go. “I thought it would be a piece of cake. I was the best rafter in the family” my brother Bronson said. After more great memories were made during the second voyage down the Kern, our raft came to a screeching half. We hit a large rock that was sticking out of the water. Our raft quickly folded in half into the shape of a taco, and my grandpa held onto his side of the rap before falling into the water and flowing down the intense waters. I tried to lunge at him and catch him, but I was not quick enough. I watched him sail down the river in the California Lounge Chair Position. I held onto hope that he would be safe. Seconds later, my ten-year-old sister almost fell out of the raft, but my dad was able to grab her just in time. “I wasn’t going to let my little girl fall into that damn river,” my dad, Patrick Dynes

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