Replace Dowagers To Rich Women

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Before I replaced the word “Dowagers” to “rich Women”, this sentence includes a rhetoric effect. For audience, they can picture the scene that those dowagers get on their expensive cars, put on their silk-stocking coats, and go to a secret place . Audience can indeed feel the age of those women. However, after I replaced “Dowagers”, the sentence becomes insipid and boring. Who cares about the destination of these rich women? There is no attractive point in the sentence

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