The Effect Of Peer Review On African-American Community

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Your conclusion was pretty good but as I mention in the peer review, I would suggest making it a bit longer by adding a few more sentences. The sentences could potentially focus on reasons why you think this topic hasn't been discussed as much as other topics or maybe what you hope to bring to this discussion. You could even expand on the so what aspect and its potential effect on the African-American community. There was not any phrases or words that stuck out as repetitive to me.

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