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Thesis Statement Analysis

Decent Essays

I picked the technology in education as my topic for final essay. I wrote about this topic for my first essay, and I was really interested in this topic. Since I am major in electrical engineering, I have a lot of opinions on this points. The writing process for the finial essay didn’t go as well as I expected. I had a hard time to build up the thesis statement for my paper at the beginning of my writing. I was trying to make my thesis statement as clear as possible. During the editing of my statement, I discovered all the sources that I found could not really support it. However, I learned a lot about thesis statement from this problem. I discover that finding the correct sources is really important and thesis statement can be changed because of these sources. After figuring out the best …show more content…

The critical thinking was the best part throughout my writing process. By reading all the new sources that I found, I actually had a lot thoughts and opinions. Luckily, the information from these sources can completely support my viewpoints on this topic. For my future wring, I think I will spend more time on rewording my sentences. The structures of the sentences in my finial paper was quite simple. I always afraid of using new structure because I do not want to make any grammar mistakes or confuse the readers with this. The other part I think I should improve for my future writing is my vocabulary. Actually, I learned a lot of new words from reading the materials. I believe that reading can help me a lot. After wring the finial paper, I learned more about technological education. I realized the importance of integrating technology in education because it could benefit both students and teachers. Since it is connected with my major, I want to invent some technology that can help education after graduating from university. By working on the final paper, I also realized a lot of improvements in my writing

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