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A Life On The Trail: A Narrative Analysis

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Narrative Writing Prompt

“Round’em Up and Move ‘em Out!” and “A Life on the Trail” give information about how life was on a cattle drive. Think about what might have happened if you were actually participating on a drive.
Write a narrative for your teacher about being on a cattle drive. Be sure to include narrative elements such as sensory details, dialogue, figurative language, and description as they are appropriate in your writing. Use details and information from the passage in your narrative.

Writer’s Checklist

My narrative has an effective beginning, middle, and end.
My narrative flows smoothly from one idea to another.
My narrative develops plot, character(s), and setting.
My narrative includes specific and relevant details, …show more content…

He started it like, “It was a cold spring morning and I had to get up before the sun was up so we could get everything taken down and put always to leave as soon as the sun started to peak over the ground and I had a horrible feeling that something bad was going to happen but I tried to ignore it and get to work, but little did i know what was going to happen was going to be this bad. As we started again we came upon a big mountain and nobody liked the look of it but it was the only way to go so we had no choice. Not half way up and the Horse wrangler let the rope to the other horses to lose and they all started to fall of the mountain, the next thing we know before anyone could get to him he had already fell with the horses and there was no way to get to him he just laid there covered in bruises and blood still alive but the horses not so much, we tried to say him but he broke his leg and couldn't move on his own so he told us to move on and that he would be there when we got back so we continued. Everyone was sad and didn't know what to do since we lost our horse wrangler and we were a little scared that we were going to fall so we slowed down and the sun began to set we decided to keep going and stop when we got off the big ol’ mountain, but it started to rain and become really slick, we were close to the bottom but not close enough to if we fell we would be okay and the animals would be okay so we stopped and set up camp just like we are tonight but the weather was 10 times worse little did we know that cows hated thunder. There was a big

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