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Growing Up In Detroit, Michigan

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As a child, I remember growing up in the beautiful city of Detroit, Michigan. It was clothed with one hundred plus degree summers, 6 feet or more of snow winters. A building called the Renaissance, which housed a rotating restaurant on the Penthouse level. It was the Motor city home of General Motors and the Motown city of music. Growing up there was so much fun and amazing to me. Where we would watch the bright, red, blue, green and yellow fireworks on the Fourth of July at Edgewater Park every summer, participate in community activities at the 4-H club. There were barbecues with our neighbors, one of which had a daughter with the exact first, middle and last name as mine. On the one side of me a lady everyone referred to as Ms. Pat, use to bake fresh yeast bread from scratch, and would always share with me and my sisters. We could smell it while outside playing in the yard and inside the house. Then you had the neighbor across the street with the rough edge to them, where you would hear an argument or two every once in a while, but when Mama needed some help while my stepfather was away in the Army, she could call on Joey and he would always be right there with his "yes ma'am and no ma'am" etiquette. With the memories of all things good from the eyes of a child, seeing everything as …show more content…

One tool that I have picked up in this chapter is a chart that helps me to realize how to write with the most details, to compare and contrast between the abstract descriptive writing versus concrete descriptive style writing. Just as my trip down memory lane became so vivid again to me reflecting on my childhood in Detroit, through this descriptive writing assignment and writing about it warmed my heart like a hot pan of fresh baked chocolate chip cookies, with a cold glass of milk which makes me very

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