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How Lomax and Fellow Prisoners are Treated Essay

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How Lomax and Fellow Prisoners are Treated

In this essay I will be looking at ways in which Lomax conveys how he and his fellow prisoners are treated here in this passage from the book. To show evidence of this I will select quotes which show choices of form, style, vocabulary and narrative viewpoint. Overall I aim to highlight the ways in which the attitudes and values are conveyed to the reader.

Lomax Perfectly describes his transition from a P.O.W camp to Outram
Gail. 'What our captors were in fact doing was consigning us to a lower circle of hell'. This extremely poignant statement shows use of imagery in a way that stands out to the reader. He uses 'lower circle of hell', which is a simile to emphasize the absurdity of …show more content…

This is mostly from the viewpoint of Lomax now, as an old man who can look back and comment on it with toned down emotion and consideration.

Moving on to the use of adjectives which Lomax has liberally used throughout the first paragraph we get the impression that there was no pre meditated violence or planned torture, it was just neglect of the most damaging kind. 'some of his colleagues were bored, slovenly and brutal'. Both 'bored' and 'slovenly' are adjectives that describe well the casual attitude of the guards. I would imagine that the attitudes of these guards were strongly disliked by Lomax' morals. He doesn't believe in laziness, to him every thing must have a purpose and he likes to carefully consider and plan any thing he does. I cannot imagine that this lax, thoughtless behaviour impressed him much.

Further on in the second paragraph there is more evidence of imagery, and how Lomax uses it to good effect. 'cradling those frail creatures of skin and bone in his own emaciated arms'. This comes across strongly in many ways; firstly he is implying that these 'creatures' have taken on a kind of sub human form through their illness and horrific neglect and deprivation. Secondly the man looking after them is also rather 'emaciated'. A rather juxtaposed statement as the carer is almost as weak and sick as whom he is caring for. The descriptive

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