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John Wideman's Brothers And Keepers

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At first, the challenges disturbing the development of John Wideman’s novel referenced in, “Brothers and Keepers,” appear to be common, and simple. In a nutshell, the story narrates Wideman’s brother, Robby’s, life. More importantly, it describes his time behind bars. By the end of this first draft, Wideman finds himself in a predicament that almost every creative— whether they be a writer, painter, or film director— eventually experiences: the ‘missing ingredient.’ This doesn’t seem to be an issue of severity, at first, and the road to finding the solution doesn’t look to be taxing. However, this ‘missing ingredient,’ becomes a series of larger problems that have more complex beginnings. Because of this, the resolutions prove much harder …show more content…

For example, if he was able to cross into his brother’s world, it would mean he must come to terms with the harsh reality of the situation: “A thousand books would not reduce his sentence one day (Wideman, 274).” Instead of standing on the oppose side of the glass and watching things from a safe distance of detachment, he would have to face the full hit of pain that comes with having a loved one behind bars. This predicament, unfortunately, carries over into his writing. By the end of his draft, Wideman cannot seem to tie it up properly. The book ends with the prison scene, is supposed to wrap up with a conclusion that answers all questions: “Not only would the prison section have to pull together many lose ends, but new material had to surface and be resolved (Wideman, 279).” He desired a miraculous end, one that had the potential to bring together a world by knowledge, change, and enlightenment. But, the scenario seemed immovable. Problem was, Wideman was looking for an epiphany that couldn’t occur, because Robby was still in jail: “I realized no apotheosis of Robby’s character could occur in the final sections because none had transpired in my dealings with my brother (Wideman, 274).” However, a larger part of the challenge to complete his novel, is due to an ignored resentment: “…something like that envy was stirring. Worse than envy. The ancient insatiability of ego picking up… (Wideman, 282).” As Wideman searches for a solution by questioning his brother more deeply, he begins to compare the success of his story— himself— to the strength of his brother having to endure prison conditions: “The source of my brother’s strength remained a master to me. To discover the source… I found myself comparing what I’d accomplished outside the walls with what he’d managed inside. The comparison made me uncomfortable (Wideman, 282).” If, and when, he finishes the

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