Hello Mirna,
Overall you have a great start to your Unit 4 Assignment. Personally for MLA Format I would subject you not not double space in between paragraphs. I recommend instead that you add one more paragraph of information in order to achieve the 5-6 pages.
When you are working on your second draft make sure to follow the MLA Format Instructions. If you have any questions about the MLA Format you can always refer to last week's reading, OWL. I also suggest that you should send your essay into the Washington State University Writing Center for them to ketch and grammar or punctuation errors. I do see that there is a few function errors such as: “Progress has been made but as the…” it should be Progress has been made, but as the…”. Or,
The improvements that I need to make are simple. Learning how to properly cite a source in an essay and citing it at the end. The right punctuation is something I need to be careful with and I need to work on. I feel that’s what I need to worry about the most. I also often get stuck and thoughts are often blank. I hate when I write and I lose my thoughts and become stuck.
The first chapter of the MLA Handbook covers the very professional and rather mechanical process of writing a research paper. It begins by identifying the different types of research and the important skills developed by creating these types of papers. It then dives into the actual process of writing, beginning with the selection of your topic and suggests that the subject matter should interest you throughout the entirety of the writing process. A major chunk of this chapter is dedicated to exploring different research methods and sources, making sure you are aware of all of the information that is available. It also stresses the importance of using credible sources and keeping track of which ones you’ve used, creating your working bibliography.
The length of the research paper must be no less than 1,500-words and no more than 2,500-words. The 2,500-word limit does not apply to notes or to the annotated bibliography. In-text citations are required. If your sources are not acknowledged, your paper will receive a zero and will be required to be rewritten for a lower grade because this is considered plagiarism. No more than five quotations are allowed in your paper.
Once again, I had made mistakes I hadn’t even noticed before. When my paper went through peer review, and I received feedback, I was told something I had thought I had already done. I was told, “Commas need added in a few spots like after 'In fact, and Still,” (Anonymous). Surely when I went back to the essay there were not commas in some important spots, for example, “In fact about a third of students who take out student loans never even graduate and receive their diploma” (Straley 3). Having a peer read your essay, can really help you find your grammatical errors. When we read our own paper, we often read it as if the punctuation is there, even if it is not. When someone else reads it though, they can easily identify these mistakes, especially when it is their first time reading your
Running head: APA Formal Research Paper Include a running header (a short title of your paper) only on the title page Type as: Running head: TITLE IN ALL CAPS All additional pages should just have the short title without the phrase Running head Center the title The long title of your paper should include the main idea and scope of your paper The title should be typed in 12 point Times font Do not bold, underline, or italicize the title How to Format a Formal Research Paper Using the APA Citation Style
Some of these errors included repetitive transitions, sentence fragments and general grammar and punctuation errors. After these errors were fixed, I thoroughly read through both of the essays in order to develop a full understanding of what else I need to improve. Following these readings, I fixed any further grammatical errors I may have missed the first time when I revised these essays earlier in the semester. Following this revision, I expanded on a few paragraphs where I felt as though my ideas were not explained well-enough. I expanded a fair amount on my paragraphs in Project #3 as I believe that I had left some ideas unexplained. One of these ideas include how children are the ones who will one day help to shape the future. I also improved on some further transitions that I found could use some refinement. After improving on these transitions, I simplified any overly-complex sentences I may have had in my essays. Throughout the semester, I have had a problem with writing overly-complex sentences. The process of revision has helped in clarifying this aspect of writing for me as well as aspects relating to transitions and sentence fragments. Through the clarification of these aspects, I believe I have grown as a
Throughout your paper I did find a few grammatical, and spelling error. I will try my best to include as many as I found. I will also include the sentence below my comment, so that you have a better understanding of what I am pointing out.
After you are done with the paper take it to someone and have him or her inspect your paper for any mistakes you may have missed. The draft they are correction is called the rough draft. After they check your paper fix any mistakes they may have found. Repeat this process with a couple of friends or teachers and you should be ready for the final draft.
In my writing, I was having grammar and punctuation issues. I used second person instead of the first person and vague words, like “things”. I had pronouns misused, commas left out and used two words with the same meaning in a paragraph. Also in sentences, numbers need to be spelled out instead of writing down that number. In MLA format, the dates
American Psychological Association this is what APA format stands for. APA format is used and taught widely throughout the world on different works of academic papers. However, we use academic style on our papers for the purpose of communication, our writing is the only way for our professor’s to know and understand our thoughts (Sophie Cormack 2013). Academic style writing helps form ones thoughts and organize their work, and the methods academic style uses to help one form those thought are by having an introduction, 2-3 body paragraphs and a conclusion, it also includes using APA format. APA format is a style that provides a system of giving others credit to others for their contribution to your work (Author Unknown Published 2017). APA
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The different types of formatting I had to learn in college is getting out of hand. The all of the different formats are loosely connected. The MLA format and endnotes are very similar in that they are found at end of a paper, but you do not give put the author last name and page number after it. I choose to use footnotes, because my laptop cannot decide what it wants to do. Another difference is the lack of putting your last name before the page number in the header, but is similar is APA Format. As you can tell I wrote off the script, because the paragraph was so lackluster. The front, size of the front, the title located in the middle, and the front should stay in normal style. If I had footnote after every single sentence, did even
I had been putting off the research paper as long as I could, now I was in real trouble. The night before the due date and all I had was my name and four blank pages. The essay was to summarize the life of a famous person in history. The topic was not the problem; it was my procrastination. I had always been good about getting my homework done in time except when it came to formal writing. Formal writing has always been hard for me because of the formatting and citing, I am hoping this class will help me overcome these obstacles and make writing fun and enjoyable. I will first tell you about my history with formal writing, then I will talk about using online article databases and googling information. I will then discuss my experience with sources and quotes, using MLA format and my experience using in-text parenthetical citations.
The MLA Format gives students a standard on which to write on. Students are expected to write in such a way that it is professional and informative. A person would not expect to get a job if he showed up to the interview in shorts and a tee shirt, because they would not have the professional appearance for an employer to think highly of them. If a paper is written in the incorrect format, than the person reviewing the paper will not feel that the paper is creditable or they would feel the writer just did not put in the effort. MLA formatting makes papers fit a uniformed look. With academic paper being formatted the same way, the paper becomes more comprehensible. Citations that are formatted the same can be more easily matched up with their
Your paragraph(s) should be professionally written, single spaced with APA formatted citations and references (there is a reference textbox at the end of this form. Use it for your references).