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My First Parallel-Personal Narrative

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The day of all days, this was the big one. The day every child dreams of. Only once a year does someone get to play in front of 100,000 people, all yelling and shouting, with me included. The last weekend of September, the AFL grand final, it’s always an exciting one in my household. However this year was a different situation. This year was much more exciting than any other, up until the infamous ‘mishap’ that brought the day to a halt. My family hosts a big party each year, with all my friends and relatives invited. They’re all huddled round a TV screen, with the aroma of sizzling sausage in the air. You would walk through the halls of my house, the walls are bleeding with the colours of each team, face paint was constructed onto the rosy …show more content…

The first bounce is always an enthralling one, you can hear the roar up and down the street as the game begins. I was supporting Sydney, this was their first shot ever at an AFL premiership! Whilst the rest of my family hoped that that team from the West, the Eagles won. I was a big fan of on baller Brett Kirk from Sydney, I loved watching him play and I would run around in the back yard pretending to be him. Harry loved watching Ben Cousins play. We often had fights over who was the better player, but as all good friends, it often ended with us having a juvenile tussle pretending to be each other’s footballing …show more content…

I made my way up the tree as Harry’s eyes darted around the front door, waiting for any movement, he was ready to warn me. I finally reached the ‘exit point’ of the tree and look down. It became very apparent to me quickly as to why Mum never wanted me in this tree. However, there is one way up the tree, and consequently only one way down… Harry lined up, he kicked and I was the least ready I had ever been to take my magical mark. I took the leap, it was a lace out kick, probably one of Harry’s best I’ve ever seen. With my arms at full extent I reached out to the football. A clean grab with what I thought was a fantastic mark… I landed with the ball tucked away in my left arm. Harry was cheering in the background. The whole house erupts into cheer, but not for my fantastic mark, West Coast took the lead. I started bursting into tears, running straight past Harry and into the brace of Mum. After explaining the situation, I kept saying sorry, it was on an instant loop. Ironically as Sydney’s lead was cut three points, as was my right arm, broken in three different spots… To this day, as every grand final comes around, the story is told to many, about my painful yet thrilling

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