When it comes to organization, I had some ability making sure that my writing flowed and seemed coherent, but I had trouble making sure that the organization was the best it could be and allowed readers to fully understand what I was writing about. Coming in to the class, I knew how to piece an essay together so that the writing seems like it makes sense and the reader can follow it without getting lost throughout.
However, I had trouble making sure that my essay has the best organization that it could, and that the reader not only would be able to follow it without trouble, but actually be interested by it. In the class, especially during the organization workshop, I was able to see the organization that others see in my writing, and was able to adapt that into my writing piece.
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Because of the changes that I made in the organization of my persuasive piece, rooted in others’ vision of it, I was able to produce a stronger essay overall, one where it is coherent, easy to follow, and interesting to
This type of essay takes a bit of organization, and it's this organizational process, this gathering of facts, that helps you learn as you go.
When one enrolls into an honors or advanced English class, there are many worries that come to mind. These worries create thoughts such as ‘Am I a good writer?’, ‘Will I pass?’, or ‘How do I even start a paper?’. My teachers never specifically taught me to write. My teacher that I had for 9th grade English and my 10th grade honors English class always gave good grades. Once I got into my first AP English class, I felt as though my writing was inferior. In my distress, I went to the internet and I found that you do not have to be gifted in academic writing to get good grades on your essays, I found that organization is the key to writing a powerful essay.
Taking a look back at my past writing assignments and drafts for each one, I can clearly see the improvement in how they are organized. My first draft for writing assignment 1 was basically one long paragraph. I clearly remember Mr. Bogdaniec’s advice on how to separate and create individual paragraphs that only contain one topic or main idea. Also with his handouts on writing an introductory paragraph and how to write the conclusion paragraph were extremely helpful in putting together my first writing assignment in this class. I followed the steps on brainstorming and then steps for creating a plot, and didn’t feel overwhelmed and confused as I had
One of the biggest issues in my writing essays has been the organization of them. When writing these essays, I wrote in the order of what I had seen and sometimes went back and found other strategies I like better and placed those in. This caused all of my strategies to become very out of order. In my second essay. I organized by “comparisons to other cultures, strong diction and vocabulary.” This was not the order that they appeared in the essay and this
One of my weaknesses in my writing is that I tend to have a “one track mind”. Once I have an idea about how to word something or organize an essay, I tend to only see it from that perspective, even if it’s not the most optimal way to convey my arguments. This class helped me think outside of the box and learn to organize things like I would not normally do, this included how I would analyze texts or synthesize ideas. The in-class activities helped me learn to be creative, the class readings gave me examples on how to organize that creativity and the instructor conferences helped me further organize my thoughts and organization.
I’ve always struggled to break the boundaries entangled within the composition of traditional essays. Between AP Language/Literature courses and AP U.S. History, my writing had become noticeably formulaic; I relied heavily on templates and felt awkward abandoning the traditional five paragraph essay. Although the formulaic way of writing assisted in my capability to critically recognize the difference between opinion and evidence, the patterns were not helpful in developing my organizational skills. My ability to form argumentative ideas from given prompts strengthened, while unity and coherence within paragraphs proved to be my downfall. It was not until my second semester of English at the University of Georgia that I noticed my organization was not comprehensible to the reader. Some paragraphs were like mazes; they left the reader wondering how the first sentence connected to the following sentence. Along with organization, English 1102 helped identify my lack of transitional phrases within paragraphs and the tendency for my argument to shift. Nonetheless, this course has highlighted my strengths as a writer, including my ability to incorporate evidence so that it supports an intelligent, challenging thesis.
When I first came this classroom, my basic writing was a way lower than I thought, because my writing was a kind of messy due to the missing of strong vocabulary words in my sentences, transitional word to tie up my sentences and how to use quotation more efficiently in my writing and to summarize someone else thought. In fact, a major part of those problems was related to my brainstorming because I was always doing a free writing, instead of organizing my thoughts or ideas after the brainstorming. Even though I was a poor, I learn the concept of organization and sentence structure, the way of summarizing and quoting, and to write the comparison and contrast essay.
I have been working on organizational skills throughout semester and conveyed selection of choices meaningfully. Although I am still struggling with this, I feel ease to know that there has been an improvement. Making sense of what I am thinking about writing is not challenging, but the problem is of how to say it and what idea to start with. However, I confident that the end of
The area I struggled in my essay is poor organization. In my expository essay from tenth grade, which is about the
It was a miracle that i got through that those essays and the class. My sophomore year came around and so did english 2, i was prepared to dread that class more than anything else. I remember feeling uneasy when getting an introduction to the first written assignment. It was noticeable that the teacher was motivated to get familiar with a new type of outline the english department had came up with since it seemed like the one before was of no support to us students. The outline seemed bearable at first glanced but at the back of my head, the question of “how do i put my thoughts into words” still remained a mystery. I was aware that for my writing to improve, my way of organizing my thoughts in words had to improve too. The teacher used the outline and showed us how to write a proper essay including how to phrase our thoughts in the direction of our writing. In that class i had an awakening and was enlighten to what was the begining to my first real writing. I remembered writing that first assignment with interest and comprehension. My thoughts formulated its way into my writing. My writing constructed into a well written essay about the universal idea of the book ‘Of Mice and
To develop favorable essays, I must organize. By creating an outline before writing I can write effectively. When I wrote my essay on Beauty, I did not organize or use an outline. A couple beneficial websites that will assist me now, and in the future, to continue to strengthen my organizational skills are: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/544/01/ and
One of the techniques I am going to use through out college is talking to
Learning that writing, although creative, is actual very structured really helped me become a better writer. I was able to understand article betters, and better understand what I was writing about. My essay themes for this semester was “Gender” and the “American Dream”. These topics held very close places in my
Throughout this semester, this class has taught me many things. I have learned the process of drafting and revising, how to structure my essays, how to write to a specific audience, how to make a thesis, and how to use outside resources. In the three essays I chose to put in my portfolio, I believe I have support to back up the fact that I have learned these things.
The description essay was also a great amount easier for me to write, because it was mostly about my own perceptions. I have always been interested in philosophy, and one of the major points I like to read about is how to see your surroundings in different ways. Seeing the world in the vivid detail that can expressed to others, the ability to interpret the world around you in a beautiful way has always been important to me. I practice this frequently with poetry and other means, describing how other people because emotion is also my preferred ways to practice this. There is still much I can learn about organizing, organization has always been a weakness because I tend to rant, and lose my train of thought even when speaking. Having a mild attention issue makes it difficult to focus on one topic