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Personal Narrative: Australian Ninja Warrior

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Written Explanation: Using the structure and themes from the television serial ‘Australian Ninja Warrior’, I have completed a creative writing titled ‘The walking bridge of Victory’. The story is about a male in his adolescence who is determined to finish an obstacle course, but is effected by his prosthetic leg and time. Taking elements from the serial to develop creativity, I have chosen to include in my story themes such as purpose and time which become evident throughout the story. I have related to the serial in aspects of the course structure, its features of time and audience support. My story will include informal language and include literary techniques such as… descriptive language, similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia, imagery and …show more content…

My self-esteem must be crazy! I scanned the gargantuan course with my diminutive eyes and turned around in panic and bewilderment. Jack and Marcy screamed with excitement on the concrete adjacent to the audience stands. Every person was confident in my success, yet I doubted myself completely. I sauntered onto the foam platform with my noodle legs dangling like a tall clown. The clouds had rolled apart allowing the sun which appeared like a golden coin to flash its harsh light at me, creating a spotlight affect. I glimpsed at my closest friends, then at the sidesman, who nodded in …show more content…

I needed to react faster. To gain confidence I contemplated at my friends, they were over the place dancing like giraffes, if only I was in the stands, life would be stress less. I looked ahead at the bridge of blades rotating at rapid speeds. They spun faster than a Ferris wheel which meant sprinting was my only option. I looked at the distance between the tempestuous water and me, a mere twenty metres. I sprinted across, tripping over the last blades and summersaulting over the spongy mat. Few that was a breath-taker! I shaped myself and gazed at the time two minutes thirty seconds that was quick, I needed to be faster. I centred my eyes on the pole grasper and recognised it was similar to oscillating on jungle ropes. I approached the first rope and inhaled, kept track of the time and leaped to the rope. I caught on and turned my body to face the second. Swish! The third and fourth were just as clean. Each jump decreased the distance between the water and myself. Now the difference was twenty centimetres and my body was losing concentration and hope. I jumped completely forgetting my other leg which was hanging in a grasped position on the fourth

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