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Personal Narrative: What I Believe

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Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea. What prompted you to act? Would you make the same decision again?

At my Boston-area elementary school, I was truly an all-star as far as achievement went. I got straight A’s with ease. I sang as a boy soprano in professional operas, and I was one of the top swimmers on my swim team. I consistently made efforts to be a good and kind person, but I did not take nearly as much pride in that as I did in my accomplishments. Theorizing one day in sixth grade about meaning, purpose, happiness, love, and the universe, as adolescents do, I reasoned: “As long as I get straight A’s, I’ll be fine.” My conclusion soon proved incorrect. It was not until I came to Vermont five years later that I …show more content…

I quickly lost my focus and got low grades. I stopped swimming and singing. My naive dreams of Harvard, the Olympics, and the Vienna State Opera became unrealistic in my mind, and I was devastated. My anxiety eventually became debilitating, and the summer after my sophomore year, I went to an anxiety treatment center in rural New Hampshire. After I finished the program there, an educational consultant referred me to Rock Point School in Burlington, Vermont to complete my junior and senior years. I intended to reclaim at Rock Point what I saw as lost …show more content…

I now have a new equation. I still value personal achievement, but I now know it has its place in a grander scheme. What matters much more is selflessness, because in selflessness lie both more peace of mind and more peace in the world. Applying to college, I look not to the U.S. News & World rankings but to my heart because my heart understands that there is value beyond prestige. I abandon dreams of attending Harvard or Princeton just so that I can one day say I went to Harvard or Princeton, and embrace dreams of UVM because it is terrific university where I believe I will best be able to learn to be a positive contributor in the

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