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Online classes can be as hard as traditional college courses, sometimes even more so. The online student, however, has to be committed to the course to be successful.Evidence from three of my EN 1113 papers this semester suggests that I’ve made great progress in style, organization, and content. Reading through these papers, though, it’s clear I’m still working on improving knowledge of convention. In the beginning of the semester, I struggled with many aspects of writing, style is one of them. After going through 15 rigorous weeks of working on my literature skills, I believe that my style has improved immensely.A writer's style is what sets his or her writing apart and makes it unique.Word choice, sentence fluency, and the…show more content…
In that essay, the goal was to explain the effects of a cause of your topic OR the causes of an effect of your topic. The organization of this essay varied.Although it was great in some places of the essay , it needed work in other areas. The poorness of my organization shows in the claim, “The dreamers were brought to America as children and were taught in the same school systems as every other American. They are just as educated as us and that is all their parents wanted for them when they brought them to America. By taking the immigrants Trump is causing the dreamers to give up on their dreams and aspirations”.( para 3) If one were to read that statement, they would be confused due to the fact that it has a poor organization. The statement, “Trump’s administration went about ending DACA without following proper protocol, yet they still are enforcing the removal of the dreamers.This resulted in attorney Dulce Garcia and several other dreamers deciding that this is a matter for the court of law and filing a lawsuit against the repeal of DACA”(para 2) The final aspect of writing that I believe that I have progressed on is content. Content is both information and communication: the sum total of the freshness, readability, relevance, and
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