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The Play ' Paranormal '

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The script 1600 PARANORMAL AVE presents with a creative and imaginative premise. The idea of the US President getting guidance from other former “ghost” Presidents is definitely an idea that is a good set up for comedy, conflict, and character transformation. The story’s goal is clear. The stakes are strong. The script is driven by solid themes about priorities, trust, family, and believing. With that said, the overall script would benefit from more development. The areas to review are the structure, tension, and tone, as well as character development. In addition, there are some credibility issues. The opening sets up the paranormal tone and the ordinary world of the protagonist, Michael. It’s clear that he takes his job seriously and has neglected his family. He has clear expectations for his kids, motivated by his own backstory. There’s a solid inciting events when he has a near death experience and begins hearing and seeing the ghosts. He’s faced with a strong moral decision about war. The second act is driven by the idea that the public thinks he’s not mentally stable to be President and he must prove them wrong. His plan goes horribly wrong and eventually his role as President is at stake. In the third act, he outwits his foe, but more importantly he learns that family comes first. One of the concerns about the presentation is story type. It’s not a true comedy and it’s not a serious drama. The setup or premise is fitting for a comedy. To make this type of

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