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Vocabulary On Redemption

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I am so very sorry mother and father. I know that I acting very childlike and carefree on the night in question. I have completely and honestly learned my lesson. I can completely assure you that this dumb mistake will happen again. that I will not. Considering that I have learned my lesson, I am asking for a more lenient rule change. On Saturday, my associates are going to be out; after than 11:00 pm. I would very much appreciate it if I could hang with them until then. This is my first offense on this scale that I have ever made, considering that I feel that I could be given another chance a redemption.
This paragraph's designated audience is a loving and caring mother and father. Protesting why the writer may deserve a more lenient rule regarding weekend time restrictions. In the beginning, the author tries to show his repentance in his wrongdoing; then giving a set of subsequential reasons why his request may indeed is valid. Thus stating what his counterparts will be doing without comparing, which could be frowned upon. Also stating why the author should be given another chance at redemption. Vocabulary or dictation includes words suitable for a formal persuasive paper. Paragraph Is also written in a nondemanding tone, especially considering the audience has greater authority. Lastly, the author ends with a …show more content…

Thus beginning with an entertaining sentence, yet still apprising the reader of the current situation. Then continued with mostly gripes and complaints regarding current standings, Resulting in a more dramatic tone. After which giving details on a devised plan for the purpose of requiring a rule alteration. Ending with stating the possible yet unwanted outcome and a plea for blessings. The author uses more relaxed non-formal Dictation, but not so to the point of lackluster sentence structure. The Author also expresses feelings with utter disappointment and felt unethical

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