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an umbrella/roadmap paragraph to explain what is to come. That way a reader really understanding where you are going and how things fit together. Same with topic/thesis sentences. From a structural point of view, your background may end up being a bit long. You want your background to be shorter than your analysis section. At your current fourteen pages, you may want to watch out for the background section overshadowing the analysis section. I think there is some room to cut, but you are going to

Second, I was a bit embarrassed to ask because I thought you might be scared of me and won’t want to be my friends.” He looked at them hopefully. “Okay. You can be our friends. Since you don’t have a name, how about I name you Komo?” Karen said. “Fine with me. Let’s

our move on someone. We walked up to a young man that looked to be in high school and began our conversation. We started off by just introducing ourselves and telling him that we were working on an assignment and just wanted to get to know him a little bit better. The conversation actually flowed really well and we had a lot in common like our love for sports and technology. His name is Dilan Patel and he’s a junior at Siloam High. You can probably tell by the last name that Dilan is Indian. I knew

Ghosts by Naomi Wood The short story by Naomi Wood was written in 2012, and is about Pia, who is a middle-aged woman and the day where the short story takes place, is her 40th birthday. In this story we meet Pia, her partner Daniel and random people from the streets and of course Pia is our main character. The short story starts in the middle of Pia’s day, she just finished working and she is about to leave the car park at work. She is on her way home, where her partner Daniel waits to take

Lily , she is took a year in medical school, she is a surfer ,she has a little sister named Diana , and she has a father . The mother passed away when she a little girl and she misses her so much . She wanted to get that thing off of her mind ,so she went to the beach to remind her of her mother . She went in a car with this guy ,but he knew how to speak Spanish and a little bit of English . Well so does she ,but only a little bit . Charlie said , “ Call me if you have trouble .” Lily says “ Don't worry

took the last sip. I felt hydrated as the ice cubes were hitting my lips and little bits traveling down my throat. My palms were covered in water drops from the cup. I went back to painting after I dried my hands and gently wiped my lips with a soft napkin. After painting for awhile I decided to take a small break. I held my cup tightly and ran downstairs with little drops dripping from the cup. There was just a little bit of lemonade left so I decided to carefully pour the rest into my cup and head

house and run small errands. Jimmie is still a little bit slow and sometimes complains about joint pain. Breakfast consists of bread, eggs, and a cup of milk for the younger children. Carrie produces much more milk in the green rich fields of San Joaquin Valley. Grandma packs a bag of lunch for the school children. They each get a jelly sandwich and a glass of water. Money is still tight, but not as tight as it was two years ago. Dinner is a little more food. On Sundays they have meat and vegetables

- You heard Calvin talking and knew he was doing a video but decided to walk in anyways. You waited until he wasn 't talking and was editing his video. "Cal?" "Yeah?" "I was just thinking that maybe we could do something for a bit." "I 'm kind of busy right now, Y/N," he said. "Yeah, I know, but I 'm just feeling kind of-" He interrupted you. "Fuck. Y/N, can you just go please?" He asked and you could tell he was trying to control his anger. "Maybe you just need to relax and-" "No, I

After it started getting a bit later than what they wanted to stay for so they drove back to mindy's house they all took off there

passionate about something. Another thing that I noticed is that when I sit, I sway from side to side or front to back, but I just have to be in motion. It’s just something that allows me to burn off the extra energy that is within me. I think that all the little things I do, such as leading with my left foot and having my right face outward as I walk explains why it kind of looks like