Psyc 1111 Learning Journal Grading (AutoRecovered)

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Learning Journal Grading Unit 1 List 8 dimensions of wellness with ratings (4 pts) List 8 dimensions of wellness without ratings (2 pts) List high and low dimensions (2 pts) Rationale for high and low dimensions (2 pts) Incorporation of literature (2 pts) APA errors (-2 pts) Less than 300 words (-3 pts) More than 500 words (-1 pts) You did a great job rating your own wellness for each dimension on a scale of 1-10. You successfully analyzed the highest and lowest rated dimensions of wellness and included a rational for your rating of these dimensions. Furthermore, you did well incorporating what you learned this week in relation to the learning journal activity. The majority of your post was information from an outside source. While you provided one citation (Hettler, 1976), this is considered plagiarism as it is a more than one sentence taken from an outside source without quotation marks, paraphrasing, or proper citing. The primary focus of these learning journals is to provide your thoughts and opinions about the topic of discussion for the week. Therefore, a bulk of your submission should be your own thoughts and ideas. You are expected to incorporate outside information, but it should not be the basis of your paper. This will be your one and only warning about plagiarism. Any future instances of plagiarism will result in a zero grade as well as report to the university. You did a great job rating your own wellness for each dimension on a scale of 1-10. Additionally, you successfully analyzed the highest and lowest rated dimensions of wellness and included a rational for your rating of these dimensions. While you briefly stated why the wellness model was important, you did not incorporate what you learned this week in relation to the learning journal activity. More so, you noted the use of an outside resource, but did not cite the areas in which this information was utilized in the body of your work. Unit 2

List health related belief within the community (2.5pts) List common attributions of health problems (2.5pts) Reasons for healthy versus unhealthy people (2.5pts) Own beliefs about health (2.5pts) APA errors (-2 pts) Less than 300 words (-3 pts) More than 500 words (-1 pts) You have successfully reflected on the beliefs related to health within the population in which you currently reside. You have highlighted the common attributions people make about what causes health problems and what they consider to be descriptive of healthy versus unhealthy people. It is interesting to see how your own beliefs relate to those of your community! You have successfully reflected on the beliefs related to health within the population that you currently reside. However, you did not highlight the common attributions people make about what causes health problems and what they consider to be descriptive of healthy versus unhealthy people. Make sure to always address all of the questions of the assignments. While I appreciate your insight on GMO in relation to the U.S. versus Indonesia, you did not follow the directions of this assignment. You were expected to 1.) list a health related belief within the community, 2.) list common attributions of health problems, 3.) describe the factors people in the community relate to healthy versus unhealthy people, and 4.) specify your own beliefs about health. Unit 3 List population-level intervention for health-related behavior changes (mass media, financial incentive, etc.) (3 pts) Effective plan for improving health-related behavior at the population level (2.5pts) Recommendations for implementing this plan (2 pts) Incorporation of literature (2.5 pts) APA errors (-2 pts) Less than 300 words (-3 pts)

More than 500 words (-1 pts) You have successfully reported a population-level intervention for health-related behavior change. The plan/method you’ve described for improving the health-related behavior at the population level is very detailed. Additionally, you did well incorporating the literature from week 3. I believe the recommendations you’ve provided are well supported by the literature. You have successfully reported a population-level intervention for health-related behavior change. The plan/method you’ve described for improving health-related behavior at the population level is a great idea. Some areas for improvement include incorporating properly cited references to support your discussion and using paragraphs to separate ideas. You have successfully reported a population-level intervention for health-related behavior change. The plan/method you’ve described for improving health-related behavior at the population level is a great idea. Some areas for improvement include incorporating properly cited references to support your discussion and paraphrasing those sources versus directly quoting them as this is plagiarism. My biggest critique is the lack of incorporation of your own recommendations for implementing these types of interventions. My biggest critique is your focus on several different types of interventions without a centralized focus on one as it limited the details you were able to provide. My biggest critique is your lack of emphasis on one specific health-related behavior. You did well identifying a population-level health related behavior (i.e., cigarette and alcohol consumption) and a solution for addressing these issues. My biggest critique is your focus on the health-related behavior without as much emphasis on the intervention and how to implement it at the population level.

You did well discussing population-level intervention as well as what influences health-related behaviors. However, you did not address the main focus of this assignment which included the following: 1.) identifying a population-level intervention for health-related behavior changes (i.e. mass media, financial incentives, etc.) 2.) describe an effective plan for improve the identified health- related behavior at the population level. and 3.) providing recommendations for implementing this plan. In regard to APA formatting, you included a citation for the CDC but did not provide a reference. Additionally, you included a reference without citing it in the body of your work. Please ensure you only include references for information you obtained from outside source(s) and utilized within your paper. Unit 4 Reflection on experiences with health professionals (2 pts) Identified communication styles (2 pts) Listed encouraging types of communication (2 pts) Listed discouraging types of communication ( (2 pts) Suggestions for improving communication (2 pts) APA errors (-2 pts) Less than 300 words (-3 pts) More than 500 words (-1 pts) Over 90% of your paper was found to be plagiarized (work previously submitted by another student). As such, you will receive a zero for this assignment. This will serve as your one and only warning about plagiarism. Any future instances of plagiarism will result in a zero for the assignment as well as report to the University. Your reflection on your experience consulting with a health professional was very detailed. You successfully described the communication style(s) you experienced in the encounter. It is interesting to think about what types of communication are encouraging and what types are discouraging, especially when considering how this may have influenced your health-seeking behaviors after these encounters. I appreciate the ideas you have suggested for improving communication between health professionals and patients.

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