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Essay Topic: If you could trade places with someone for one day, who would it be and why?
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There are different reasons why people want to be an entrepreneur. Some of these reasons include money, success, fame or even freedom. I personally think entrepreneurship as an opportunity to help others, to make other people’s lives better and to improve society in a meaningful way. I always get motivated from entrepreneurs who use innovative approach to create something out of nothing, something that helps others and helps this planet. Being in Information Technology field, I have always been passionate about learning new technologies, which help improve society. When I think of an entrepreneur who made a big difference by helping the world with his/her innovative approach and more futuristic attitude rather than more money making attitude, the only person that comes into my mind is Elon Musk with whom I would like to trade places with. He is the founder, CEO and CTO of SpaceX; co-founder, CEO and product architect of Tesla Motors; chairman of SolarCity, co-chairman of OpenAI; co-founder of Zip2; and co-founder of PayPal. There are three main reasons why I would like to trade places with him: To learn and to understand his innovative approach, an opportunity to get a direct access to his facilities and to understand the corporate structure & meet key
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My entrepreneur that I have chosen is my brother Justin McEwen. He was born and raised in Las Vegas, Nevada and that is currently where he resides. He started his career in the construction field when he was 22 years old. Over the years, he worked he way up to be Vice President of Construction of a large construction company.
In this Report, at first I will present my initial personal development Plan, which was prepared at the beginning of the MBA program to improve upon my personal as well as professional skills, and regarding my expectations and goals that I would like to achieve through this program. This PDP is reviewed and assessed on regular basis during the course based upon the learning and personal reflection, along with highlighting my short and long term objectives after the MBA completion, to meet personal and professional target goals.
Hello Rozhnaz! This writing looks better than the previous one that I revised; congrats! You also gain improvement in terms of the use of academic vocabularies in this essay. Some notes to be considered here are the minor things such as punctuation, redundant expression, and capitalization. Here are several takes on your writing:
My name is Ashley Cookson. I am writing this letter regarding the essay that you assigned for your Writing for Business course, ENG 200. I am in section 1258 online.
I chose my Aunt Maria and as you will see in my essay about her, my Aunt moved from the city of Chicago to San Diego California. I learned how amazing such a change can be and all the opportunities that were presented to her because of this big change she made. This essay taught me the importance of taking chances. I discovered that sometimes we must go out of our comfort zones to gain something wonderful.
Elon Musk is widely known as one of the best entrepreneurs in our time. That is because of his success in various industries such as automotive, aerospace, solar energy, satellite, financial services, etc.
Entrepreneurship is one of the hardest investments to make because it requires more than just money. Consequently, it is also an ownership investment with extremely large potential returns. By creating a product or service and selling it to people who want it, entrepreneurs can make huge personal fortunes. Bill Gates, founder of Microsoft and one of the world's richest men, is a prime example.
Another reason why I decided to become an entrepreneur is because I have seen so many people live out their dreams and find the gratification I dreamed of. While working for Sam 's Club I had an inside look at small business owners manage their business. I have encountered countless entrepreneurs find ways to reinvent themselves and provide a services and or products that continuously make their business relevant.
This summary was written to market a candidate offering has a bachelor’s in commerce and will complete his MBA in Operational Leadership in 2015 from The University of Findlay. The candidate chose to become an MBA so that one day he could play a major role in the fortune 500 companies. For him to because that entity, there were a few roadblock’s first of all he need a master’s degree for a great alma-mater, which he will get in the spring of 2016, second of all was the candidate wants to avoid corporate espionage as much as possible and for him to make sure of that he need a certification which would make him capable of examine the books of his own company that’s why the candidate will be writing his 2 CPA exams in early spring of 2016 and will complete his CPA in fall of 2016. The reason for acquiring this certification so late is because of the requirement which is necessary to have because a candidate can sit for the exam. By acquiring the masters and the certification the candidate will have most of the skills required for a high level position, but no candidate just jump to the top, the last and final step of the candidates plan is get
The MBA program was introduced for the first time in the United States in the early 20 th Century and was modeled on the basis of the prevalent 2-year graduate programs. It gained significant traction after its inception, however was later criticized for its lack of practical relevance. It was often said that “MBA was too academic, too theoretical and divorced from real-life business practice.”1 Business school subsequently responded by improving quality of teaching and content. The first year was dedicated to
| * 2.2 To identify and explain the relevant principles and concepts of management (in relation to the selected topic) those are being applied in the company.
To inaugurate this essay, a simple introduction of the manager interviewed and her company will be given. Ms YKL who accepted the interview works in Company BSB. Company BSB operates in the private and service sector with the size of 20-99 people. It provides digital marketing services. Ms YKL holds a position as a senior manager for Publishers & Partners, it is a term used in the Digital Marketing industry. Publishers & Partners team also means product team and this team will negotiate and deal with third party for partnership. Ms YKL is at the middle level of management and around 1-5 staff members report to her.
Initially I will review these essays with regard to the seven principles of good essay writing standards. Then I will discuss my own strengths and weaknesses. Next I will identify three areas for improvement. The conclusion to Part A of this Essay will aim to show the improvements that I expect to achieve in future assignments.
So why entrepreneurship? The idea that could lead to making enough money where you could pile it to a skyscraper and still be taller. So why isn’t everyone an entrepreneur? That’s because it will take blood sweat and tears to make your idea a success. The success of an idea comes in all sorts of varieties. For example, Californian advertising executive Gary Dahl, was the first to create the ordinary grey stones bought at a supply store and convinced that they were alive – Pet Rocks. The marketing strategy was built around a fad that lasted only six months, yet he made millions and got out. Marketing is way to get your name out to others.