Reflection On My Writing Style

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I think I worked hard on this essay. I tried to make in better for each draft. I had enjoyed telling my story, because I nobody know it before. It was helpful to write it and get in go. My biggest problem was to give more details. It was hard to remember the story, but I tried to give as much details as I could. I am proud for my details, they are in right order and there are many of them. I hadn’t known that I need to give all the details that happened to me. As for the feedback, I learned that I needed to give more specific details, because some of them here not clear for my classmate. Also, I helped my classmate with her essay. I wrote her that she needs more details in some parts and she needs to check the endings of the world. Moreover,
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