The Art of Public Speaking 6th Edition has a video of speech called Dying to be THin. In this speech there is a young girl speaking of her best friend who was so beautiful, had amazing hair and was completely perfect, however, things started to change over time her best friend was losing weight. Her best friend was not as attractive as she used, she was on the scale weighing herself seven times a day. Her friend had just become anorexic. The technique she used to begin her speech was a personal experience and she also gave a statistic. This technique was very effective. I was very interested on what the speaker was saying. She was very engaged and very informative. The topic of her speech was very clear and to the point. Her Topic was Anorexia …show more content…
The speaker had amazing eye contact and was very engaging. She gave the audience an amazing attention grabber, a preview of the main points, and why is her speech important and how it will benefit the audience. The way the speaker projected her voice was very well. Her overall introduction was marvelous and gave the audience and arousing feeling of interest.
The speaker had three main points . The three main points of the speech Dying to be Thin were what anorexia is, what causes anorexia and what methods are used to treat anorexia. The way she delivered the main point was very distinctly perceptible to the audience and very easy to comprehend. The speaker also did a good job with the transition from the introduction to the body. She also used supporting material in the body of her speech. These supporting materials were definition, survey, explanation, and example. These supporting materials were very
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The way the supporting materials were used gave the speech a very clear understanding of what the speaker was saying and gave the speech a really good flow. When the speaker used the supporting material of definition it gave the readers a understand of what anorexia is, this was very useful because there might have been people in the audience who did not know what anorexia was. Another supporting material that the speaker used in the speech was survey.The survey was the outside information that gave the audience information that has already been proven. What also made this speech really god was the explanation of the speaker's personal experience. THe speaker would always go back to her personal experience and relate her experience to her information which is actually an amazing strategy to use. The speaker was always reminding the audience of how this relate to her and how it can benefit the audience in the long run.
The transition in this speech were very effective. The speaker always made it clear when she was going to transition to her main points. She was able to carry the audience smoothly from one idea to another with no trouble. If she was able to transition so well the entire speech would have been a mess and very hard to comprehend. Because she transitioned so well, she was able to guide the audience from one idea and main oint ot the
In the eleven chapter of A Pocket Guide to Public Speaking, the authors talk about
During the entire speech, her pathos was very dominant to the argument. She starts out her speech with an anecdote, so she can establish a personal emotional connection with her audience. In her second paragraph she uses the sentence, “... decades before valet parking, fondue lunches, and gear
From the beginning she pulls the readers attention, she uses a metaphor “Eventually being perfect day after day, year after year, became like always carrying a backpack filled with bricks on my back”(Quindlen, 296). This metaphor is the most significant part of her speech as she continues to refer to this metaphor throughout the speech. She uses this for the purpose of appealing to the audience in a meaningful, and personal way, creating a connection between her and the audience as most students, not only college students, can probably relate to the feeling of being heavily put down by something , not necessarily what she is talking about. Her use of pathos is what makes the speech so appealing and interesting, because she makes it so relatable and easy to understand.
While I was listening to the audio recording of his speech, he sounded so confident when talking to them. He was a persuasive speaker and spoke to his audience with respect and honesty. He began his speech with a strong hook which I believe caught the attention of his listeners and myself. “I
Shirley Chisholm's speech is effective because of her use of logical flow of ideas, persuasive techniques, credible sources, and counter-arguments.
I gave the introduction 5 stars. The first time I heard this speech, Alison’s introduction grabbed my attention. First, she used her visual aid and showed a picture of a baby. Doing this was not only appropriate for the topic, but it was using Pathos, from Aristotle’s Rhetorical Triangle. Babies are natural attention getters. And showing mothers and grandmothers a picture of an adorable baby only helped her with her goal of getting her audience to focus. She then asked the audience a question as an attention getter. “What is going on in this baby’s mind”? She
She states many of her opinions on how the press should stop telling and spreading false events and ideas in the newspaper. When given the chance she tells her audience journalist about how the American press about her feels and how she feels challenged by them. Overall, the beginning of her speech tells the audience how she is going to state information and how they should listen to
Mary Fisher uses a topical organizational pattern throughout the speech, and I believe that she used this pattern so she could talk about the main points: ignorance, prejudice, and silence people view HIV/AIDS with, and the need for more of an awareness of the disease. I was able to pick up the main points by listening throughout the entire speech for topics. Mary Fisher’s introduction can be divided into the different parts of the introduction: attention getter can be found in her opening statement as well as revealing the topic, she establishes her credibility in the statement about not wanting to be HIV positive, and finally she previews her body when she says that HIV/AIDS does not care who you are. Much like the introduction the conclusion can be divided into its part as well, and these parts include letting the audience know the ending of the speech is coming, done when she says, “To all within the sound of my voice,” she ends her speech with a summarization,
However, the speech flipped an interesting emotional switch when she said that she was very anxious about giving the speech. She implied that she wasn’t sure what to say to a group of talented women. I don’t exactly understand her thought when it came to this part, because what would be the point of telling the audience that you’re anxious. For me, it just slowed down the pacing of the speech, because we’re waiting longer for her to get to her actual thesis.
From a communication and speech analysis stand point Ms. Alexander kept her self poised, keep her tone of voice smooth and inflecting when she needed to drive certain points home. She kept the audience engaged by moving around telling personal anecdotes that related to her topic to allow the persuasiveness of her speech to drive home about the problem of the criminal justice system and race as a whole. Her first point that really captivates and hooks you in within a matter of minutes of listening to the speech is when she says, “ People of color are the main ones incarcerated…Put in cages and treated worse than animals.” Right their she captivates and audience that otherwise believe she's crazy talking about race in the criminal justice system. Ms. Alexander managed to captivate and all WHITE audience on a topic that most had already made up there minds on. Her speech was effective in that all statistics about her topic she
The speaker made direct eye contact at all times unless his head was moving to place emphasis on what he was saying. Further, the speaker spoke loud enough to be heard and did not require me to turn my volume up super high while struggling to hear him. Additionally, the speaker utilized a good pace. He moved slow enough for me to comprehend everything he was telling me but fast enough so that I did not get bored and distracted. Finally, the speaker alternated his pitch throughout the speech which kept my attention. Overall, besides the previously addressed issues, the delivery of the speech was great! I would, however, suggest having more time of the speech spent face to face with the speaker for a more powerful speech.
With all the techniques she has used they were very effective and persuasive to the audience. Her speech made a difference in many people's life that day because she connected to women mainly. She could relate to the audience a lot because they were adults with children which she has and she goes through things like a normal parent also she gives a lot of advice that can help with the problems the children are having or even the adults. With Michelle Obama being the first lady the speech was very important and effective but if it was someone else the certain points wouldn’t have got across the way she did it. Michelle Obama has a lot of respect and she is a role model to some women in the world so that's a perfect reason the speech was
The presentation Aid the speaker chose to use is a projector hooked up to a computer using a PowerPoint presentation, the use of these really brought out the message is trying to get across. We have some people that absorb information by listening others are visual learners so he covered both bases.
Comparing to my pervious speeches, I thought I was more confident and effective. Since we were in the small room, I made sure that the tone and volume of my voices were balanced. Moreover, throughout the speeches I used various hand gestures to help me get connect with the audience. Preparation is one the most effective way to improve in any kinds of speech. Therefore, I could have done better by practice and preparing more.
During the introduction she uses short direct sentences as to keep her audience engaged. Then she begins to tell us personal stories about the books she read as a child and how she started to write stories at a young age. She also makes some jokes in paragraph two such as, ‘All my characters were white and blue-eyed, they played in the snow, they ate apples, and they talked a lot about the weather, how lovely it was that the sun had come out,’ she makes these jokes to keep the audience entertained throughout her speech. In paragraph three she is still introducing the speech but in paragraph four she