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Overcoming Obstacles In Writing An Essay

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In general speaking, all of the comments is helpful for our writing. As we are the writer of the essay, we know that we are handing out our " shitty first draft". We desire to polish and present the work of perfection, however, we fail to determine where to start. The confusion of whether our judgments is right or wrong is one of the vital obstacle in writing. That is when we need the assistance of other people. No matter how good or bad is the comments, and no matter agree or disagree with the comments, it is still a valuable reaction of readers in reading our essay. As a writer who want the meaning of the essay to be understandable, I would certainly tried to revise it whenever the comments show the needs. The most important part of the …show more content…

Searching for the stories that can be added into the essay as the evidences or examples of my thesis. As far as I am concern, the explanations in my essay are pretty hollow. And my personal knowledge right now cannot help me with that. Even though all comments are helpful to me, there is one comment that I can determine as the least useful one. It is a praise of a good transition, of which I think is not a good one but a mere effort. I was just trying to put a transition at the end of the paragraph . And I think I have done it awfully for ending all my thesis explanation paragraph with just one sentence of transition pop out of nowhere. The praise actually made me feel guilty about it. In the workshop, I surely need much more time to analyze the others essay more carefully. However, I suppose a limit amount of time is a part of our training. I find it useful to separate the workshop into two sections. First, we comment the essays individually. Secondly, we explain the problem of the essays, and we discuss the matters with the writer about their issue. Another essential part of the workshop is that no matter how bad or deconstructed our article are, write more in order to help the readers understand the main point of the article so we could form our assumption and point out where the weaknesses of our works

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